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Review #1, by Tamora Reinfield Realisation

12th July 2011:
This is a really good start! keep going! but make sure its all in the same tense as you are going from past to present.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the advice!

The next two parts are still being written, but i'm on holiday (and have been for the past three weeks) so there is little writting time and even less chance of an update.

I'll post ASAP!
-M


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