YOU HAD BETTER NOT STOP WRITING THIS, SO HELP ME. I'LL DIE IF YOU DON'T FINISH IT DO YOU REALLY WANT THAT ON YOUR CONSCIENCE? It's perfect ;_; You're doing so well, please don't give up! :DAuthor's Response: Your reviews have rejuvenated me!! A new chapter will be up soon :) Report Review
I really liked it! :D I think her power is really cool, firstly because it's just a cool power, but mostly because it's exactly the kind of thing that would legitmately have caught Tom Riddle's attention. And I love the bubbly best friend archetype so I'm super excited to see more of Courtney, too :D Report Review
Aaw this story Is so cute please write mOre Report Review
Very interesting. She's changed everything and yet we all know he's evil in the future. I can only assume he uses her or she dies- or both. Why does she lie about her last name? And how is her mother's death her fault? This story is so confusing in the best way possible. I love reading every bit of it and can't wait until the next chapters comes with more answers!Author's Response: I'm SO glad you're enjoying it. Answers are on the way :) Report Review
Beatiful you should finish writing itAuthor's Response: Thank you! I plan on writing more :) Report Review
OMG your story is so different and exciting! Are you going to write more chapters I hope you will!
SteiszAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I will definitely be writing more :) Report Review
Whoa. This is so well-written! What an attention-grabber! You really must write more, I would definitely read on. Great spelling and grammar. I was also given a great mental image throughout the whole thing, which is awesome! Imagery is something that seems easy, but is sometimes difficult to achieve, and in my opinion, you nailed it. Good job!
IF there was anything I would tweak, it would be this: smaller paragraph sizes. I personally did not have any problem with them, but some readers lose interest in the middle of long paragraphs. But it ain't a huge issue, so it's really up to you if you want to change that :)
Amazing intro :) awesome job! Hope to see more!
-raznillaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your comments!! They really are SO helpful. It's nice to know what I'm doing right and what could be better :) Hopefully a new chapter will be up soon! Report Review
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