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Review #1, by academica Even an end has a start...

6th July 2011:
Interesting idea, and I like that she isn't easy on him just because he's upset. I will be interested to watch her character develop, and his along with hers. Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to avoid the whole "guardian angel" helping thing, because Celia is far from an angel and wouldn't suddenly change just because somebody is upset. Thankyou for taking the time to review, I will try to update soon :)

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