{reviewid: 2739329, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
12th September 2012:
LOL. I love this chapter. James is gonna kill Amos. :) I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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{reviewid: 2739320, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
12th September 2012:
Awww. I love your story. Keep up the great work. :)
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{reviewid: 2739240, reviewer: 'AriPotter'}
12th September 2012:
This looks like it will be good. I like the father daughter relationship the two have.
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{reviewid: 2664215, reviewer: 'ms4aisa'}
24th February 2012:
aaaw I love this story!! It's really interesting but also really amusing and funny! and I really like the way you portrayed James and Lily, they are awesome and great! I hope there will be more flirt-surprise-interaction, those are amazing :) I cannot wait for an update, so ppleeeaseee make it quick ;) ;)
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{reviewid: 2640751, reviewer: 'Fawkes_the_Pheonix'}
8th January 2012:
Please continue to update this story. I really like the storyline. Thanks!
-Fawkes
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{reviewid: 2601153, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
12th October 2011:
Poor James he only wants to help her. "Them" is her mom and sister right? Love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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{reviewid: 2599382, reviewer: 'Immi'}
7th October 2011:
I Love Your Story!
Thats, all I have to say for now.
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{reviewid: 2599151, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
6th October 2011:
AW no wonder we all want them to end up together. He is just so sweet to her. :) Love this chapter. :)
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{reviewid: 2599148, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
6th October 2011:
AW so close. :) Love your story.
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{reviewid: 2588083, reviewer: 'storywriter'}
11th September 2011:
More Please! I love the idea, and so far you have written it beautifully.
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{reviewid: 2580218, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
29th August 2011:
Aw. Can not wait to see how he reacts when he wakes up with Lily in his arms. : )
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{reviewid: 2580214, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
29th August 2011:
Love how you have them teasing and acting like friends. : ) Love your story!
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{reviewid: 2580192, reviewer: 'Defies_Gravity'}
29th August 2011:
write more this is really good!!! :D xxx
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{reviewid: 2556537, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
29th July 2011:
:) Love this chapter. Can not wait for the next one.
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{reviewid: 2549742, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
19th July 2011:
Love your story. When will he get there? Can not wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks s much! the next chapter should be up soon
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