3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by sarahbrooke123 What is this feeling?

2nd August 2011:
Its Scorpius no scorpion and its our not our other than that it was good


Author's Response: Ok thanks I'll work on it for the next chapter grammar's not my strong point but I'll keep on trying thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by Zora Weasley What is this feeling?

1st August 2011:
I think your first chapter is a nice introduction in the story, but you should stop probably writing things like: ( A/N Al is Albus nick name) and (A/N Rose's little brother), it really interupts the flow of reading.
I do like the first chapter, i hope you update more of the story.

Author's Response: Okay i was putting it in there for people who weren't familiar with the harry potter but it was a first chapter thing only. Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by misssparrow What is this feeling?

1st August 2011:
you need to work on your punctuation

Author's Response: Grammar has never been my strong point I'll try and work on it and thanks for the advice!

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