3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Old Friends and Enemies

29th October 2011:
Wow what a chapter. Ava's sister sounds like a right nightmare. A good chapter and 10/10.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 The Knight Bus

29th October 2011:
An interesting start to your story. I wonder who this girl is where people are afraid to say her name? Sounds something like what people were like towards Voldemort. 9/10 for your start and to move on.

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Review #3, by Ydnas Odell The Knight Bus

27th September 2011:
This is a promising start. Very interesting main character and I love the first few paragraphs. Very well written. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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