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Review #1, by Millarz One Shot.

7th November 2011:
Aww! This is so sad. I love how you dove deep into Sev's character and brought out his sorrow with words like "empty shell" and described her eyes as emerald orbs of mystery. Your description is full and meaningful. I especially like the line "There will be no more Severus to love your memory at all." I like how you put it, that the end of his life ends his longing for her. Great job! Go Blue Claws!

Author's Response: Thanks hun, that's very kind of you to say. I liked this one too because it was a very "personal" peice for Severus where we see him in a different light, plus the John Denver song which inspired it is just beautiful too lol. Thanks for your review!
-Bobby xx


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Review #2, by Love Good One Shot.

20th August 2011:
Oh, this is so sad! WHY FOR HEAVENS SAKE DID HE CALL HER MUDBLOOD?!?!?!
HOW COULD HE BE SO STUPID???

Good story btw :) You are very, very good at describing details... I myself needs to practice that. :(

Author's Response: Hey, thank you very much for your review! I'm sure you're very good at writing descriptions, give yourself some more credit! :) Thanks very much about this story, I'm uploading another Lily story today called Wait and See, in case you're interested :) Thanks again for the review! - Bobby x

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Review #3, by academica One Shot.

3rd July 2011:
This really pulled at my heartstrings. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it :)

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