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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LH Griffin I thought you loved me...</3

9th July 2013:
It was really nice, the plot was clever. But it was too short!! I liked the story and if it was longer it would have been that much deeper. Really liked the breakaways to 'Forever and Always.' Overall, really good.

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Review #2, by blackyy I thought you loved me...</3

13th August 2011:
it's fantastic. i love it . hah a: D

Author's Response: Thank you! Haha! :D

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Review #3, by NaidatheRavenclaw I thought you loved me...</3

6th August 2011:
I love this song :D And I think you did a really great job with it! I really got the same emotions from your story as I do while listening to the song, so that's definitely a plus. It was a very different ScoRose, which is getting hard to come across, so great job with that as well!
The one thing I didn't like in the story was how casual Scorpius was when telling her that he'd been cheating. Sure, I understand that this song came by because of a 30 second phone call, but that just seemed much too casual. I think if you started off with "This isn't working for me. There's someone else," or something like that, it would have been more believable.
Other than that, this was a great story! And if you want a banner, just request one at TDA. There are some excellent artists on that site, who can make you a gorgeous banner :D
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Ah, alas I have requested a banner on tda... it was put on ool! I dont know hpw to go about it from there, lol. and thank you SO much for the constructive criticism...! I appreciate it and I see where you are coming from! Would you mind if I changed that up and used some of your wording? Thanks!

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