Nice one! I'm begining to like Sirius/OC and you've made them work out great! A very cute, sweet, fluffy and somewhat deranging story! ;) I liked the ending, though I think you should erase the "I think" just "Ha, take that James" is plenty enough^^ But hey, thats just a suggestion because I actually adored this story! Sirius was exactly as I imagined him, and so where James, Remus and Peter, you write really well so keep that up! :D 9/10 ~LunarLuna of slytherin Report Review
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