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Review #1, by ginerva_molly_weasley Again and Again

18th July 2012:
I love the changing point of views within this!

It really helps intensify the sitaution and show the similar beliefs of both of them. I'm so glad that they liked each other though, its truly simple but perfect.

Don't worry about the cliche in it because its Teddy and Victoire and since Teddy can turn himself into a super hot guy if he wants to then cliches really can work and I think in this you have made it work with the whole tickling situation as it shows an already established intimacy.

Well done

Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)

I wrote this, in one night, at midnight I think. So, nto my best work :P But I'm glad you liked it!

I love Teddy and Victoire. They're just so awesome.

~Sara


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Review #2, by Bookworm045 Again and Again

6th August 2011:
Ooh! Fluffiness galore! Ahah, this was cute and slightly amusing and I really liked it. The POV switches were very well-timed. It was fast-paced, but you made it work, which is strange, because usually fast-paced stories don't work well. Such an adorable one-shot, it made me smile.
-Katherine045/Slyterin

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad I made you smile. I'm glad you thought it worked well too, even though it is a bit rushed :/. Thanks for the review :)

~Sara


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Review #3, by LilyFire Again and Again

5th July 2011:
It's a good plot, and I think you have a lot of potential with this story, though I do have a bit of advice, if you want it.

First thing is instead of the headers (Teddy's POV, Tori's POV) you could use a * and it wouldn't break the readers concentration. You've done well enough that you can sorta tell that it's a new speaker anyway.

Another thing to tell you is maybe quite saying what happened and show it? Like here:
"He moved forward until I was pressed against a wall" could have had more to it. Something like: "My back hit the wall as his hand moved to my waist."

But I thought the story was really cute :) You've done a good job with it. Keep up the writing!
~Lily

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! And yes, I;m always up for advice! Yeah, I try different ways to head them all the time, I can't find a way that works for me yet, that doesn't look silly.

Thanks for the advice though, I can always use it!


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