I Love it! Its Funny. Pearl is quite the Character! its well written and unique. No big errors and it made me laugh, and trust me, that is hard to do.Author's Response: Thank You!! Report Review
A nice introductory chapter! Some can get a bit too boring, but the chatty tone of the chapter made it enjoyable to read. I liked her different quirks, being quite normal, but everyone thinking she's not.
Haha, I really like the idea of winged horse riding! Did you come up with that, or is that from somewhere else? I like how this was the introduction, and I'm looking forward to future chapters with more action.
- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Winged horse riding was just something I came up with, but when I was searching about it on J.K Rowling's website it came up with (on the wizard of the month archive) a professional breeder of them, so I guess it has a tiny bit of truth in it. :) Report Review
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