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Review #1, by grace gryffindor A Long Drawn Out Day

20th July 2011:
this is a really great story,very captivating and interesting. Please write more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I will write more I promise! Thank you for the review!

Potter Power xx


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Review #2, by gran/ger Never Judge a Book By It's Cover, Hermione.

12th July 2011:
I'm glad you've taken Draco out of the shadows. Excellent timing by the way. It would have been too much, too soon, if any earlier! I am enjoying your story because Hermione's being allowed to be a girl and not a stoic heroine! Next step a friendship leading to romance possibly? However you've planned it, I'll keep on following your story as I'm hooked! Looking forward to your next posting.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That just put a massive smile on my face!! As for the friendship/romance.keep reading...it may just happen!!

Next chapter will be posted next week and I am currently writing chapter 5!

Thank you again for reviewing, Potter Power xx


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Review #3, by Opalpixiechick Small, But Gradual Steps

5th July 2011:
Love your story. At least Harry and him get along so she will not have as much trouble there.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you keep reading to see how the relationship develops. Thank you for reviewing :)

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Review #4, by lily-alice Small, But Gradual Steps

5th July 2011:
i completely LOVE this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad your enjoying it!

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Review #5, by lily-alice Small, But Gradual Steps

5th July 2011:
i completely LOVE this story!

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Review #6, by TheDoctor Small, But Gradual Steps

4th July 2011:
you have a really interesting plotline so far and it will be fun to see where this goes. Thankyou so much for not just letting Hermione's parents deaths just blow over as so many fics do. After all Hermione really would be horribly depressed if such a thing were to happen.

You're great at writing in a show don't tell style without overdoing said style. You give the perfect amount of detail to keep the stry moving but also leave allot of room for the reader to imagine heir own details.

I would be careful of a few things though, firstly I'm not sure if you intend this, and if you do then just ignore this, but so far Hermione's relationship with Harry seems to be that of a boyfriend and girlfriend. It seems like you might have been going for a more brotherly love sort of thing. But again if it's what you intended then it's really well done :)

Since you siad this is your first fic I have a few tips. You have a great beginning but just be careful not to make Draco become the male equivelant of a Mary Sue. If he's changed for good that's one thing but give him some lingering flaws.

I think you have a great beginning and I'm eager to know what Harry and Draco's private deal was. Be careful of editing though because there were a few places were stray letters were or words used when I think you meant something else. But great start and update soon!

Author's Response: First of all thank you for the review!

I see what you mean about Harry and Hermione's relationship, I did mean it to be completely brotherly/sisterly. I will be sure to make that more clear as the story goes on.

As for Draco, he will have some flaws coming up!

Editing I do need to proof read more. I was just so eager to get the story going! But thank you for being that up, I will be more careful.

Overall thank you so much for the advice and lovely coments, I hope you read on!


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