Omm (oh my merlin) this is an A M A Z I N G story line, you're an amazing author :D
I know you are busy but please update soon
~Macy x Report Review
Okay wtf is up with purses and puppies and ears?
Please, can you write some kind of dictionary to explain this?
~Macy xAuthor's Response: It's an April Fools Day prank pulled by the staff! Totally not my doing. Sorry you were confused :(
-Rebecca Report Review
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I AM SO GAHHH
I AM SO FANGIRLISH NOW :(( :)) Report Review
Aaah, I'm in far too much excitement to leave a
coherent review so I'm just going to read the next
chapter and that's it. :A: Report Review
Hahah, all that bickering. It's just so natural, to read something like that. And though this chapter is quite filler-y, it's just a nice read. Plus I have this beautiful mental image of James swooping through the air on his own.
"It seemed like he-for the most fleeting of moments-owned the night sky, owned everything that surrounded him."
This line. Urgh. So fountainhead-y. I love it. ^_^
I have guesses about everything other than what James could be writing. I don't have a clue what that could be, honestly. So I'm going to read on and find out. Report Review
I like how every character is so distinct. Like, there's something about everyone of them that separated them from the rest.
Also, I totally think Gryff and Molly are going to end up in a relationship at some point.
Short review, because I just can't wait to read on. :D Report Review
Ouch. That last paragraph really hurt. But it's exactly how I think Natasha's mum would behave. For some reason I can't seem to make up my mind about her. Sometimes I feel bad for her considering her husband ditched her and everything, and sometimes I'm just annoyed. Cross that. Most of the time, I'm just annoyed.
Finally! Hogwarts! I'm going to hurry onto the next chapter now.
PS: Favorite line from this chapter
"...act like you're the biggest disappointment since your older sister announced she was in love with 'that hooligan with the blue hair'"
Ah Teddy. :') Report Review
I actually did a fist pump at the end when she said no. Four chapters in and I'd say it's about time. :D
I think you've paced this story perfectly, it's not rushed and I give that credit. Most fics I read these days just hurry through, delay the romance part a bit, tie up the loose ends and finish it off. I like how Natasha's taken her time to make up her mind. Her low self confidence shows, it fits the character you've created through the last three chapters.
I also love Dominique's story in the beginning. This is the first time I'm reading Fleur portrayed negatively, and even though initially I found it odd, the more I read, the more it fits.
Good work! :) Report Review
This is an amazing story. I love it so much. It's so funny and sweet and I love James' character. What would be really cool, or maybe just super funny, is if you made a spin off or one-shot about Molly and Griffin. I absolutely love those two and laughed so hard when she said she stole his wand and locked him in the shrieking shack. This is a good story, and please update soon!!!(: ~LilyLou Report Review
So cute! Omg, are they dating then?!?! PLEASE, just tell me they're dating!!! And I kind of forgot about Al's existence...LOL I'm too focused on Natasha and James, sorry Al! Hahah, and usually i'm obsessed with Al stories this is just sad. But seriously, so cute! I have a bad feeling about Fiona and paparazzi though :( They're going to ruin Natasha and James, aren't they...? I'm making myself sad, ahah. Love the writing as always! Report Review
This is a really good start! Already you have me interested about the characters and whats going to happen to them. I'm curious as to how Natasha will get to go to Hogwarts (assuming she does go to Hogwarts) when she has to tour the world.
Your writing was really easy to read, and actually really funny at some parts. Especially, ""The winner is flammable for Christs sake! She is a hazard!”"- I actually giggled out loud!
Overall a brilliant first chapter, 10/10 x Report Review
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!! I love how close James and Tash are getting and im so curious to find out what her mum is going to think of him. And the whole Miss Teen Witch contract??! i have to know what happens!!! pls update soon :) Report Review
You know, I wrote a story really similar to this when I was little (not HPFF ofc). This is obviously written much better than the efforts of my seven year old self, but yeah, I find it weird yet funny ;)
Anyways, this is awesome ♥ Report Review
okay that was just the most awesome thing I have read in a while. You have serious talent! Please update soon this is the best!!! Xxx Report Review
OMG THEY KISSED! FINALLY!
Wonder what will happen next...
This story is soo addictive!!! Report Review
This seems super interesting! A pageant girl, huh. I really like how you write and how the plot seems to be going and yeah. Nice job :D Report Review
THEY KISSED! AW!!! I LOVE IT! ADORABLENESS ALL AROUND! BUT I'M SURE SOMEONE HAS TO HAVE SEEN THEM AND TAKEN A PICTURE, HER MOTHER IS GOING TO FREAK OUT IF SHE FINDS OUT. I MEAN. WOWZER! AND I LOVE ALBUS, BUT THAT MIGHT JUST BE BECAUSE I'M A SUCKER FOR GREEN EYES... Jeepers creepers this is an awesome story, I also love Molly and Griffins relationship! It's adorable how much she likes him, even if she isn't aware that she likes him... Oh, and just a suggestion, the next chapter would be really cool if it was in James' POV. It'll be awesome without it, but I just thought I would share that..(:
Awesome Chapter, update soon please!!!
Lots of love,
Claire Report Review
My favorite pairing has to be Molly and Gryffin. I would love it if you wrote an outake of their date. I laughed so hard when Molly explained where Gryffin was! Report Review
This chapter was amazing! Well done! I can not stress how much I love your story and characters! That kiss.SO PERFECT AND CUTE AND AWWW :') I really really really hope you'll update soon! Report Review
YAY NATASHA AND JAMES!!! they are seriously so perfect for each other. And yes they kissed!! I sort of expected it...but i didnt want to get my hopes up just in case they didnt. But they did! So i'm so happy atm!
LOL and when Molly was all chill in the dorms, I was like WHAT THE. but then the real Molly arrived when she locked Gryffin in the Shrieking Shack.
OMGOSH JAMES AND NATASHA! I am still so hyped! and she kissed him back! AHH YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! x Report Review
THEY KISSED! TOTALLY THE BEST MOMENT OF MY LIFE!
I hope James and Nat don't do that confusing thing where they kiss but then avoid each other because they don't know what to do after that.
They need to just get together and ignore everything that Nat's mom wants her to do.
It's kinda funny how Dom and Nat were denying that it was a date but Molly was the first one to accept that the three of them were going on dates and there was no point pretending otherwise.
Always the smartest and wisest, Molly.
I can't believe she locked him in the Shrieking Shack. Too funny for words xDDD
Of course I could see that it was Dom and Scorpius for a long time coming but it was weird accepting the fact that it wouldn't be Rose and Scorpius. ScoRose is what I'm used to and like, so it was like O.O but then I was like, yeah of course that would happen xD
Lily and Lucy crack me up xD
the diva-ness of the two of them is just so funny but so cute at the same time for some reason.
I'm glad that James and Albus have such a close relationship now. Honestly, I always feel like James and Albus would end up being the closest to each other because in the end, I just feel like that's what's right. I don't like to see the two of them arguing and the fact that James can turn to Albus makes me so happy.
Anyways, I hope James and Nat will be together for reals and none of that I-don't-know-if-we-are-going-to-be-together nonsense. xD Report Review
NAWH!! This is cute and sad and funny and CUTE! You are freaking amazing deary, keep up the supermegafoxyawesomeHAWT work ;))Author's Response: Thank you so so much :))) I'm so glad you like the story!
-Rebecca Report Review
uhm, did I ever mention that I loved you? no? oh well, I LOVE YOU!! this story is so amazing! I love it so much! There is so much going on and everyone has their own problems they're dealing with, which makes it really interesting!
I can't wait for the next update! but I'm afraid it will be something big and bad :/ but I'm still excited!
now a question: about how long do you think this story is going to be?
as I said: I loved it, great work! and update soon, please! :D :DAuthor's Response: Ahh I love YOU for loving the story :) Seriously, it's reviews like these that make me so happy I write. I'm glad you like all the stuff I have going on. Sometimes I worry that maybe people don't care about all of my subplots, but I love my subplots too much to give them up.
As for your predictions on the next chapter, you'll just have to see. But I think we do know eventually there will be something not so great that will happen...
I'm predicting that there's going to be like... six chapters left of the story? At least, the way my outline is going there should only be six chapters left. Which is kind of scary because that's pretty soon when you really think about it.
Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm so glad you like the story :)
-Rebecca Report Review
OMG! James and Nata! Please update soon! Can't wait! Hogsmeade date and Fiona will probably ruin it!!! You said you had finished the chapter already... Please update! You're killing me with the suspense!!!Author's Response: Haha I know! James and Nata are going to have some one on one time !! Since I've already posted the next chapter, you already know how it went so I really hope you liked it and sorry it took me disgustingly long to respond to your review.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
-Rebecca Report Review
omg this is SUCH a good story! really really good. I am in LOVE with your writing style so good.Author's Response: Thank you so much! You don't know how happy it makes me to hear you like my writing style. I think it's one of the biggest compliments a writer can get :)
-Rebecca Report Review
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