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Review #1, by james girl Formidable Secrets

25th April 2012:
I love it! Can do a sequel?

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Review #2, by Mani Formidable Secrets

28th December 2011:

How can it be over already!?
Wow. I really loves this one. I adore SiriusxRemus but this was by fr the number one best slash of them I have read so far! (and trust me I've read a lot) anyway, brilliant way to introduce the plot, subtle descriptions and incorporations of J.K's storyline, and overall just gosh dangit cute!

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Review #3, by Iloenchen Formidable Secrets

24th July 2011:
Aw, that was so sweet! I have a soft spot for slash because those stories are so often great to read and I love Remus/Sirius even though I could never see them together.

The whole "Can I kiss you" conversation seemed a bit hard to believe for me. I can see it happening, but maybe you could have portrayed the awkwardness that went with it a bit better? Not just the nervousness, I could feel that, but also the whole kissing-a-boy-and-kissing-my-best-friend-is-really-awkward thing.

But that's just a minor thing and the rest of your story was really great! I enjoyed reading it. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the points, I'll work on htose in my next story :)

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