What a good one shot. You've really showed the friendship that the other mauraders had towards Remus. That they'd risk everything for their friendship.
Well done for this one, 10/10.

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What a very lovely one shot! This is beautiful!

I really liked the fact that the atmosphere in this story is just so calm and contented especially at the beginning because it helps set a very mellow tone which continues throughout the piece.

The marauders just seem to be content and I really like your portrayal of Peter and how exvcited he was just because he was able to take one of James' pieces showing him to be true to canon.

I also liked the change in tension when the night fall came as it helped convey that even though the boys were going to be with Remus it just wasn't a nice experience and none of them liked the time of the month.

I also liked the way you showed unity between them at the end! The last line is also very effective! Well done

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! Im so glad you liked the tone and characterization as i tried very hard to get it just right. :)

Thanks again,

Ladybella

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This is really good. I've never read a Marauders tale that isn't strictly based on James/Lily. And yet this kept my attention the whole time. Everyone is more or less in character, and there are some really cute moments.
I really like this! Kudos! :)
brithewriter

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Im really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the lovely review! :)

Ladybella

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This was rather interesting. I like how you had dialogue without actually having it.

I also liked the whole bonding experience and everything. This was a well written one-shot.

Results will be up on my blog August Third!

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