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Review #1, by Raitseka Chapter 6

19th February 2007:
you should really continue this

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Review #2, by coffee Chapter 6

12th March 2005:
aah well, at least you made it this far. so i'm not gonna bother naggin you, know how it feels but it was good

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Review #3, by coffee Chapter 6

10th March 2005:
it's so good, why is it discontinued?

Author's Response: Because I'm lazy, uninspired, stressed out, and don't wanna =P

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Review #4, by coffee What Must Be Said

10th March 2005:
it's so good

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Review #5, by coffee prologue

10th March 2005:
very moving

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Review #6, by _lynn_ What Must Be Said

1st February 2005:
I love this story so much i cannot stand it!

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Review #7, by _lynn_ prologue

1st February 2005:
i love this.... I've actually never pictured Draco and Harry together, but when you write it it seems so obvious. And i'm glad this is from Draco's point of veiew...he's my favorite.

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Review #8, by me Sick

19th October 2004:
come i love your spunk but i just dont understand ther story cause you are leaving tooo much lines

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Review #9, by Loriency Chapter 6

10th October 2004:
omg, they dont' allow swearing in reviews? i wish i had known that, haha, that's pretty funny. anywho, plz plz plz update soon, i so can't wait to find out what's going to happen, and this story is too intriguing to make us wait this long, i love it to death, lol, cya

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I just really don't like this story anymore, and I am incredibly busy with school, and I'm also working on another friend's stories, and do you notice the plethora of excuses I'm coming up with? ANYWAY. I promise nothing. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #10, by Loriency Chapter 6

1st October 2004:
wow. im so going to end up crying from this story, it's so censoreding amazing. plz plz plz update soon, u have no idea how amazing your story really is. i've never read anything like it, and i highly doubt i ever will. plz, update soon so we can find out what's going to happen!!! u can't jsut leave it there, every chapter has a cliffy, so plz hurry! i love this story, as u have probably guessed, and u don't need anyone to beta it, btw. it's perfect, i beta and it's perfect. great job, again i say, update because i'll kill someone if i don't find out what's going to happen. cya

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Review #11, by Loriency Just sitting there

1st October 2004:
wow. that's about all i can use to describe this story. just...wow. it captures the reader making them keep going because they have to find out what's going to happen and how it ends. it's amazing. btw, i just finishd chapter 2, so i'm going to read the rest. cya

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Review #12, by Lust Chapter 6

18th September 2004:
This is really good! I think you should consider writing alot more.

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Review #13, by Madame Meow Chapter 6

14th August 2004:
YAAAYY~! You updated!!! That was really good. I think I actually prefer it in Harry's POV. xP I'm gonna rate that as a 10!

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Review #14, by nat_rulz Doesn't matter

13th August 2004:
awww how sad : ( poor harry! update soon!!!!

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Review #15, by Mel Doesn't matter

7th July 2004:
That was really great! I can't wait for you to update. I really like how completely unique this story is, how Harry is so angry, and not being vulnerable like in every other fanfic. I love the way he is trying to push everyone and everything away. You are doing a great job, so keep it up!

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Review #16, by Melissa Just sitting there

7th July 2004:
I like what I've read so far. xP And I liked Ever After, too. Nice how you seem to be advertising for it. Heh, j/k. I love Draco/Harry, so I can't wait to read more. :)

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Review #17, by ltnaconejita Doesn't matter

4th July 2004:
that's really good! it's poetic and dark and great!i hope you update soon! maybe you could do something like this: something happens, and harry does need help, and he might ask for it, or not, i dunno, and draco helps him anyway. then draco runs away, thinking harry is angry and hates him and then harry goes after him or something. just a thought, :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda hope I update soon, I'm just spending a lot of time reading fanfiction lately, so I'm not really writing anything ^_^;; But yeah, thanks for the idea, I probably will use it, cuz I don't really know where I'm going with my story ^_^;; Thanks for the idea and reviewing!

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Review #18, by AlexandraColette Doesn't matter

2nd July 2004:
This is lovely. And I agree with you, slash does not mean porn. Just because two guys are together, doesn't that they'll randomly get together in a closet and censored madly. Your sense of writing is great. The way you write out Draco's thoughts is wonderful. Keep at it. -AlexandraColette

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Review #19, by Catherine prologue

20th May 2004:
Good luck on your other projects And more chapters please?

Author's Response: More chapters are coming, I'm just too lazy to write them : P I'll update as soon as I decide to stop procrastinating. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #20, by edith prologue

4th May 2004:
Hey Becky, that was really good! You're an awesome writer and you're very good at describing peoples' feelings. Ok that sounded so cheesy... yea ttul

Author's Response: No, it actually doesn't really sound too cheesy because one of my other stories, Perfect, is just me trying to express feelings. Ttyl, thanks for reviewing!

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Review #21, by ltnaconejita Doesn't matter

4th May 2004:
hey that's good! im glad its not ucky slash, lol, yet, but there should be a deeper conflict in Harry that makes him go to Draco more, then.... well u know. :-) good job, and please update!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm getting through the Draco-getting-attracted-to-Harry part, only I didn't really plan this story out, so I don't know what I'm going to do next ^_^;; Thanks for the suggestion on how to get Harry into Draco. I'll try and update ASAP, but there are a couple of other things I want to work on first, so updates are probably going to be few and in between. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #22, by catherine Doesn't matter

3rd May 2004:
Thqank you for writing more, I too like this story. If I may comment, not flames. I hope the comments will be helpful. I feel that in the earlier chapters you saved the Italic thinking for the more animal thoughts of Draco-one's that came from the gut so to speak, or driven by sexual tension. In this chapter it feels that sometimes the italics had complex thought. That was disapointing . The animal behaviour is one of the alluring qualities of this story. I like that Draco can not HELP but be magnetized to Harry. I did not mind the WOOC for Harry but it did not work for him to say, "well, that was fun, beat you on the pitch." He would hesitate some? No? don't you think? Especially if there is some attraction happening? Otherwise I like the direction of the story. IT is building.

Author's Response: I think I meant for the italics to be almost Draco's subconscious. It tells him what he really wants, even if he may not think so in his conscious mind. No offense, but I don't really want Draco and Harry to just be driven together by some lust thing and be torn apart by the same reason. Maybe Harry, but I don't want Draco to be like that. And when Harry says that thing about the Quidditch game, it's like he is so angsty, he just doesn't care anymore. He'll spill all his little secrets to his archenemy and still be an arrogant sod. I want to see if I can get them together mentally before I try any physical action. And thanks for letting me know what I'm doing with my story. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #23, by Matella What Must Be Said

3rd May 2004:
cute. I don't think harry is becoming too OOC, some of that, yes, but not much. I don't know if it really would happen, that harry would turn sour and be "pulled down to the dark depths of his mind" as you say, because i'm pretty convinced Dumbledore would be there to help him with all that. BUT reading this story i begin to think that if there was no dumbledore, no one strong to help harry keep sane, it really could happen... well, you're bringing new thoughts to my head with this. It's really very deep, I love the slightly sarcastic tone Draco has... aaaaah... Draco Malfoy... *sigh*

Author's Response: Um, I guess Dumbledore is kind of being absent again, so Harry doesn't really have anyone to save his sanity, so I think that kind of explains how he's getting so angsty. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #24, by Matella Sweep

3rd May 2004:
"Funny how much blood can come from one person." OooOOoooo. Brilliant. Loved it, yet again. But, i just have one question, and im pretty sure i could find this out if i wanted to but i cant be bothered: Is this before or after they get together?? Meaning Harry and Draco? Im thinking after but im not sure.

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: The actual story is actually before they get together, it's showing how they got together. The "prologue" is in reality kind of more like an epilogue, only it starts the story. I don't know if that makes any sense, but the story is kind of Draco almost telling how he and Harry got together, just not really because I don't think Draco would just really let someone into their mind. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Right, wtf, I have no clue what the hell happened, but that was only supposed to show up once.

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Review #25, by Matella Sick

3rd May 2004:
I can just imagine Harry sitting on the grass and insulting Malfoy. What could be sexier. *long and dreamy sigh* This story is really good! I just kept reading so i forgot to review the other chapter, but its seriously awesome. ..reading on now....

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