Really good excited to read the restAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for your positive feedback! It always makes me happy to hear from my fans. :) Report Review
Honestly, I don't get it.
I was drawn in my your writing style. It's excellent, and I like how you portrayed Draco. It's also really crazy spontaneous and exciting. (maybe a bit ironic too.) I like that. It's a good writing tempo to have, and it kept me on my toes. (Ginny IS a nutcase ;P).
However, I think this may have gone slightly overboard. One second Draco is thinking dark thoughts, then Ginny pukes over everything, and suddenly he wants to make out with her? I'm all for the funny-outrageous feel, but that didn't make much sense to me.
Bonus points for having an awesome title though.
So overall I have mixed feelings about this fanfic. Either way, keep writing!Author's Response: thanks for your feedback. honestly...this chapter was kind of a test run to see what kind of feedback i would get. thanks again for your honest opinion. Report Review
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