I cried so much! Lovely story :') Thank u for writing it!Author's Response: Oh thank you :) I'm currently in the process of writing Chapter 12 which will be the very final chapter :)
- Draco_Scorpio Report Review
Great story. Although was expecting more, really enjoyed how it ended. Also, I loved the lyrics at the beginning of the chapters. Had every song stuck in my head while reading.Author's Response: Well by one of the last few chapters I couldn't see how the story was going to end, and I didn't want it to become majorly clichÃ©d where they live happily ever and have a bedlam of kids. Did you like the songs? Report Review
aw hermione and draco how sweet very good love your workAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
oh come on hermione just kiss him you know you want to anyway good job written i absolutely loved it it made me smile and shake keep it upAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, this was one of my favourites, because it kind of solidified Harry and Hermione's friendship :) Report Review
I hope he didn't show back up, just toobliviate her or something just as heart wretdhing. In this story you mae Astoria evilish, I feel bad for Draco haveing to meet her at the alter. Great update :)Author's Response: No, he didn't return to obliviate her. This is the last chapter of the story because I ran out of things to have happen that weren't going to be too cliched.
I know I made Astoria seem evil, but that had to happen for Draco to want to keep returning to Hermione. I couldn't have a girl who could be so perfect for Draco and so stunning to make him want to stick around for her sake. I am going to be writing a new story soon though, this time about Bellatrix as a student and her descent into madness.
That totally sounded like I was plugging it, but I just thought I should let you know that my Dramione days are over, for the time being that is ;) Report Review
So, she knows, now what is Draco going to do about it. I am glad Hermione is enjoying Georges company. He needs a distraction.
Very good chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks for enjoying the chapter.
I feel I needed George's presence in this chapter as a grounding presence for Hermione, hence his presence. Report Review
LOVE IT POST MORE SOON PLEASE!!!Author's Response: My new chapter is coming soon :) In the next day or so, so keep a look out! Report Review
After everything, Hermione is worried about the other woman. thats so sweet! Though, maybe Draco should take care of that.
good chapterAuthor's Response: Hermione's jealousy is kind of explained in my new chapter, so forgive her worries :P
And there's only so much Draco could do in that situation :) Report Review
I think I might cry! It's so lovely. Dying for the next chapter! :) xAuthor's Response: Hey KiraPotter16,
Thank-you for your review and I'm sorry its taken forever to update, but as it is I can only access this via phone at the moment and chapter 8 is far too long for me to type it into my phone. I'll have it up as soon as I can though.
Faithfully, Draco_Scorpio. Report Review
What happens next? :-3Author's Response: Hey Jakumo1,
Thanks for reviewing chapter 7 but I'm afraid I can't tell you what's happening next, where's the fun in that anyway? I'll have chapter 8 up as soon as I possibly can though!
Stay golden, Draco_Scorpio Report Review
hi it's good but don't try so hard just let it flow threw you trust me people say I'm an amazing writer but you still did a dandy job keep making storiesAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for the review.
I'm not one for sex scenes, which is why it was difficult to write. I'm an awkward kinda girl and that's why it came off awkward.
Thank you for you constructive criticism though :) Report Review
Haha, wonderful sex scene there :P
Tiddle confusing at times, other than that good work as always. Now stop making me read. :) Report Review
Can I stop now?
Well written, good pacing, with fistfuls of teenage angst thrown in for good measure. I'm guessing you identify with Draco? Nobody doesn't notice becoming wet, no matter what is going on in their mind. Report Review
Good writing, good story if you're a teenage girl, I dunno what else to say to pad out this review so I'll just hum a little bit. HmmmhmmhmmmMHMmmhMHMHMMHMHHHMMMmmmhmhmhmm. Report Review
Well done, but in real life, Draco would've been left lying on the floor after Hermione kneed him in the nuts.
Once again keep at it blah blah blah WHY DO I HAVE TO DO THIS! Report Review
If you ask me, Draco should hurry up and get with Pansy. She's gagging for it. :P
On a more serious note... not as good as the first, but still quite well done. Report Review
Hey, another chapter! Excellent. Brilliant really. And the sex scene was fine. I don't write them, but of what i read, this one wasn't bad.
I did find it out of character though, for Draco to even know what jeans are, seeing as that they're Muggle clothes. But then again, dramione is kinda of an out of character thing in itself.
Gin-ginAuthor's Response: I'm sorry I never responded, it's getting more and more rare that I can get on the computer!
It is out of character, but I felt that as he is slowly entering Hermione's world, he would slowly pick up the Muggle fashion.
That's my logic anywho :) Report Review
Hows this :P
Certainly shows promise. Keep at it and you could have a good life in writing ahead of you. Also, I refuse to use a number because... I just do. Report Review
Needs a explicit sex scene and then it will be good.
Do that in the next chapterAuthor's Response: Right, we'll see Report Review
WELL DONE! 9 AND 3 QUARTERS TO YOU! Report Review
Your back!! :)
Stupid promises darn them. I mean yes i get why buut.. *sigh*
Anywhoo... Oh my gosh Draco's seen the future! Is he a seer by any chance?
Can't wait for more!!Author's Response: Yes, I'm back. I didn't have internet for a while because I have prepaid internet and I have to go without for a month or so before asking again. I feel rude otherwise. I would update from my phone but it's rather difficult to write my story on my phone, so excuse my absence.
I won't say anything on Draco but there will be something major happen in the near future, something that isn't in the books! Report Review
Very cool, I like the concept and it is mostly well formed.
The only part I could complain about is the presence of the Yule ball dress thing, that shouldn't be in there..
Other than that it's a great read and I would enjoy it if you wrote another chapter!Author's Response: There was meant to be more in that chapter, specific to that event, but I had to rush and get off the computer. There is going to be more in reference to it later on Report Review
How can everyone but her NOT see he is falling for her. How? Even Lav-lav (bleh) does. Sorry if you like lavender.
Hehe, i love when she ran into Snape. I couldn't stop laughing. After reading DH i have a soft spot for Snape.
please write some soon,
Gin-ginAuthor's Response: Gin-gin06,
I don't like Lavender, but I was a bit shocked after watching DHP2, to find her fate, so bare with me.
I have always had a soft spot for Snape, he was the kind of character I could see had a good reason for being nasty to Harry. I will write more as soon as my computer is a bit more free on data, therefore no longer slow.
Oh wats goona happen next can't wait xxAuthor's Response: Hey xxkissesandcuddlesxx,
I can and will tell you one thing; you meet my new character! But am currently in the writing process, so I will update as soon as I'm done! Report Review
i think its amazign i got sucked into it at the first sentence the same with all the chapters r there going to be anymoreAuthor's Response: Hey Taylah,
I'm pleased you are enjoying my chapters! I am currently halfway through writing the fourth one! It will be on here ASAP!
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