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Review #1, by HPluvergirl The Story of a Summer Rain

5th July 2012:
So sad. :'( Love the story though. 10/10

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Review #2, by Blue Flame The Story of a Summer Rain

6th August 2011:
Awwh! Well, I'm glad Draco finally said that to his father even if it took that to cause it. D: This was well written, especially description wise - the beginning made it really easy to picture just what was going on! =P

What I think would have made it a bit better though would be a bit of a background as to who Luca is, why he's with Draco and how that all started, you know? ^^ It seems we barely get to know him before he's killed, and since he seems like a lovely character that's a shame! Draco might have been a tad OC, but that could also just be part of the lack of background to it. So adding some of that in could improve it loads!

Otherwise, good job! Just a bit rushed and could use some background to help us really understand the loss Draco just had and what Luca meant to him. =)

Cappie/Hufflepuff

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