I love your story, it's really great to see it from Teddy's perspective. I really like Teddy and think that he's quite funny because he's so laid back. Victoire is really moody and slightly mean, but I suppose I would feel the same way if my boyfriend turned up that late just before he was about to see me off and wouldn't see each other again 'til Christmas.
I'd actually be really pissed (excuse my French).
Anyways; I love your story and cannot wait to rad more.
Keep up the good work!!
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I love the idea of this story because its nice to read a story on here that features Teddy as the main character but isnt a Teddy/Victoire story, I'm a bit burnt out on those stories and hope that this story will be a nice change of pace. I'm really hoping for some more Teddy and Jay interaction in the next couple chapters because I don't feel as if I got to see enough of her so far. I hope you can update soon. Report Review
Hahaa that was hilarious, i like how this time period is set when everyone is away to Hogwarts and seeing Lilly at home, i don't think I've ever read one at this time. And i love the way you portrayed Lilly haha she's so cute and fiery :) Report Review
I like it. ^^ i never really liked teddy/Victorie fan-fic's but i love oC fic's. It actually shows how good of a writer someone is and your story is brilliant. :) i hope to see more of itAuthor's Response: Thank you so much ^^
I'm sorry I haven't uploaded since then, but i've been away at camp, so.. uhm... yeah... pathetic excuses aside, thank you for reviewing ^^ it means a lot to me, the next chapter should be coming out within the next week! I promise! :)
For a first-timer, this is actually pretty good. i'd love to see how Teddy grows as a character and realises Victoire juts isn't the girl for him (I'm a huge Teddy/anyone-but-Vic fan, in case you hadn't realised). Cheers!Author's Response: Thank you! :) I adore writing Teddy, and I hope to develop his character a little more as the story goes on. Thank you again for reviewing, and please tell me what you think of the new chapter when it comes along :] Report Review
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