I have to say, you presented some of the most unusual pairings here. I was really curious about Charlie/Alicia as it was something I've never tried reading before, and I quite like this little piece. I think I may have to go check the original installment where this one-shot stemmed from, because I think Beth seemed like an interesting character (assuming she is your MC? lol I'm just guessing. :P). Very observant. I enjoyed her observations very much, especially about Charlie and the bit about the war changing him. Interesting. I enjoyed the little quips and teasing in the end with George as well. And I was surprised to read about Ron/Luna! Wow. Again, curious choice of pairings. :) Very nice job overall!
xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my curious choice of pairings. I have to say, I do enjoy the odd pairings. I think I once read an Alicia/Charlie pairing in one of those marriage law fics, and I found them charming even though they were a minor pairing in the fic. I'm so glad you enjoyed this little fic, and I highly recommend you read Catch A Falling Witch. Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
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