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Review #1, by Iloenchen Misunderstanding uncovered

24th July 2011:
10/10 for a brilliant first sentence! I've read a lot of one-shots lately but none started as well as yours did.

I like your story. You're obviously a talented writer. As for you being dyslexic - I did notice a few errors but not more than in any other story so you've done a wonderful job!

Anyway, I like that you take this missing moment and write it out. I love the dynamic between Ron and Hermione. The yule ball scene is a bit too long in my opinion to work as a backflash since it takes up most of the story, but it is so beautifully written that I enjoyed reading it, too.

Alltogether, you did a great job with this!

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