it's too short, add more flashbacks but all in all, it was good and it made me cry Report Review
this was so beautiful! you had me in tears! I loved it! so sweet, that second flash back with Draco definately brought tears to my eyes! you are super talented! :DAuthor's Response: thank you so much!! im so glad you got to feel what i hoped everyone would feel!! (not that i would want to make anyone cry on purpose :P) Report Review
this was a wonderful little one-shot, well-written and very enjoyable. i could really feel the sorrow in Hermione's character but her acceptance with what had happened still shined through. you did a wonderful job writing this. you should be very proud.Author's Response: thank you :) Im glad i got the feeling i wanted to pass through in you. Report Review
it made me cry :(
gosh i feel so upset right now.
but a very well written piece. intense and emotional.
10/10Author's Response: That you so much!! I really appreciate it :) Report Review
it was wonderful, pulls on the heart strings as well. I loved it because a story that can make someone cry is always a good story :) keep up the great workAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
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