Ppplllease update :)

 Report Review

Love love love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

 Report Review

UPDATE! Please?! Your story is amazing but I hate the fact that you killed off Fred, and Charlie is such a dick! I hope Hermione and Fleur can patch things up, I liked their friendship, I really do luv your story so PLEASE update!!!

Author's Response: Technically I didn't kill off Fred, JKR did. My story is cannon and will end cannon.

 Report Review

Please continue!! Cant wait for the next chapter!

 Report Review

well what happens now

 Report Review

is it weird i want her with George?

 Report Review

plz update =] i love this story

 Report Review

Quite disappointed. You are a great writer, but perhaps you could write something more positive? While I was reading the story I only got sad and depressed. So much hurt, lies, and deceit. -.-

Author's Response: Sadly, positive is not my style. I you want a happy story with a happy ending this is not the story for you, because it is neither. I am sorry you do not understand the true value of tragedies, but I am not sorry you do not enjoy my story. Good day to you.

 Report Review

completely obsessed with this!!! love the drama.

 Report Review

Haha so was that rabbit or duck piece suppose to be a himym reference or do I just think of everything in relation to himym :)

 Report Review

Wow! Powerful first chapter!

Siriusly89 here with your requested review :D

First off, Titus is such a cute little name! Go Titus!

And the. . . . .thing on the back of Ginny's head really freaked me out! I still have goosebumps after it! Creepy stuff!

I'm just wondering, is George the father of Titus? Or is that to be revealed in later chapters (I'm sorry I can only manage one review at the moment, but life is pretty hectic!)

Please feel free to re-request for another review :D You know where I am :D

 Report Review

Hey it's patronus_charm with your review!

I liked the way you started the mystery by insuinating that any one of the red headed men could be Titus's father. It's so hard to not try and guess, as no doubt it won't be George as you would be letting it on too early, and obviously it wasn't Ron, due to you calling him his uncle, but it could be a bluff! So I thought that was really great, how you introduced that in, as it sort of makes the reader interact, and try and match up the clues, so they can figure it out!

Hmm I get what you meant about if being confusing, as I did feel that the whole Ginny thing, was a little weird, as I felt you could have written more in depth about it, so the reader got a clearer idead about what was going on.

I'm glad that you introduced Luna and Xeno into the story, as a lot of people tend to forget how close they live to one another, so it was nice to see the canon facts in there, as that's what makes a story go up onto another level.

I thought your characterization was good, as I found Harry's worrying very believable, as he tends to do that a lot. Also Ron's sulking as he's prone to that as well.

I'm glad that you added in that brief mention of this being after the war, as that clears up whether Fred's alive or not, as I'm guessing he's dead, given George's somber mood, and also it helps keep a time frame for the reader, which prevents them from not getting so confused.

Overall I thought it was a good start, as you've created a lot of mystery over Hermione's son's father, which makes the reader want to continue with it, Kiana :)

 Report Review

The Ginny part was so disturbing and weird but the rest, aw :D

 Report Review

That was very..provocative? I'm slightly stunned.. What is wrong with Charlie? He must be what? Seven years older than Hermione? I just find that REALLY odd..Charlie had never really been very interested in Hermione...
I'm scarred for life :'(
Just kidding :)
9/10 You should re-read some chapters to look for typos.

Author's Response: You should continue reading to find out why he's all of a sudden so interested in hermione. It explains it all in the next chapter. I'm sorry that the provocative-ness isn't what you're looking for. I know it may seem pointless but it is very important to the story. If you really read the story the scenes show the different forms of love and romance. They also show a contrast between Fred's relationship with Hermione and Charlie's. But if you don't like my portrayal I'm afraid this might not be the story for you. Because the innuendos will not be eliminated.
I apologize.

 Report Review

Please please finish this!

Author's Response: More is coming very soon. I'm glad you enjoy

 Report Review

This is pretty good so far but I feel like I'm missing something.

Author's Response: Continue reading. It is all explained in later chapters.

 Report Review

A close friend of mine recommended this story to me. I have regrettably been a silent reader thus far. I will definitely have to thank my friend. This story is not only intriguing but arousing. I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far and cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you dearly. More will be up soon.

 Report Review

Amazing read! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. More will be up soon.

 Report Review

omg my friend told me not to read this at school i now why oh well that was awesome i read the enitire thing you certainly have a way with words

Author's Response: Thank you dearly. I would have to agree with your friend however. This is not a school-appropriate story. I am so glad you and hopefully your friend enjoy.

 Report Review

Woah! This chapter is WOAH!! There is so much heat between Hermione and Chaarlie but it doesn't sound like love. Does he really want to marry her or is he just saying that to get back at ron?

I think Charmione sounds best.

I have actually been to Clos Maggiore. My Husband and I went while on our honeymoon. You really described it perfectly. Great job! Cant wait to read more. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: You have read my story correctly. You are right. It is not love. And yes this is to torment Ron. And I am glad to hear feedback on Clos Maggiore seeing as I have never actually been there.

 Report Review

I see how Charlie isn't everything he seems to be now. This chapter is soo sad. I feel so bad for Ron.

Author's Response: Im so sorry :(

 Report Review

I thought Charlie was supposed to be the bad guy? He seems so charming. anyway. I love love love the story.

Author's Response: Thank You:)

 Report Review

I love the Dumbledore quote. Ron reacted a lot better than I would have thought. I LOVE the detail in this chapter. your writing is really progressing with this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

 Report Review

What?! Charlie??? I did not see that coming at all!! good job.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

 Report Review

Woah! This chapter was intense! and steamy! LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response: Thank you:)

 Report Review