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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Christine Fire.

23rd June 2012:
Sorry, but the girl seems a little too clingy, and it's just too romantic for me, you write very well, though c:

Author's Response: Hi :)

It's fine, I completely understand. I wrote this such a long time ago and I really am not interested in writing about love nowadays. As a character, I don't even know if I can relate with her... She just popped into my head.

Thanks for the review :)


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Review #2, by Amy Fire.

20th February 2012:
I love this story! soo cute and soo good! i could read it forever and not get tired of's really good. :)

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm really happy you feel that way about it! This is a really old one-shot and I think that my writing now is way better than back then, but if you like it, I'm happy :)
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.

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Review #3, by jennifer Fire.

2nd August 2011:
Wow! i really felt like i was in amelia's head, going through those emotions. You captured them very well.
and by the way, i just came across your page today and love all of your stories so far! :)

Author's Response: Ah I think you've just made my day around 1273957653 better!
Oh wow, you reviewed two of my stories, I am soo happy!
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like my stories!
Ah I'm having a little OMG moment here. Hahaha, but thank you very very much, I will continue writing, and I really hope you will continue reading my stories, and reviewing! It makes me happy! :D

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Review #4, by nightingale14 Fire.

23rd July 2011:
I'm a big fan of Albus/OC's, but I've seen so many of them go horribly wrong, or make Al out to be totally cliche and what not. There's only a few that I can say are very well done. This is one of them.
It was descriptive. Inquistive. I enjoyed your vivid descriptions of the hurt Amelia was going through. How broken she felt when Al ignored her and yelled at her. She loved him still, but it felt like she didn't.
The last scene, when finally gets the guts to run out into the rain was perfect. It was like an explosion of emotion; it was the perfect ending. Al's feelings were understandable as well, though the way he vented was horrible.
Very well written. I really felt the emotion and mood of the story hit me, which is a sign of a good author. Very well done.

Author's Response: Hi! Oh wow, thank you so much! At first, I thought you were going to say that this one-shot was one of the ones that went wrong. I was like awh :(, but then I saw that you said it was well done, and I smiled! :D
Thanks you so much for telling me your opinion and what you thought about it. I'm happy you felt the emotions Amelia was feeling :)
Thank you!

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Review #5, by reesh; jb Fire.

3rd July 2011:
i really liked it! all of your one shots are really good. keep writing & ill keep reading ! < 3

Author's Response: Awwh thanks so much! It really means a lot :)
I will keep writing so I guess you'll keep reading ;)

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Review #6, by NextGenna14 Fire.

22nd June 2011:
Wow that was amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm really happy you liked it! :)

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