{reviewid: 2786679, reviewer: 'Agnes'}
13th May 2013:
This story is reallys great, well written. But it's also extremely depressing! I think I actually had tears in my eyes! I really feel bad for the girl. And this Max... I don't even get why he's treating her like this!
All this to say, this is a great job, I loved it.
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{reviewid: 2786500, reviewer: 'Lore%27'}
12th May 2013:
Please continue this story!!!
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{reviewid: 2783740, reviewer: 'Lorena%27'}
24th April 2013:
Sad,really sad but awesome!
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{reviewid: 2783736, reviewer: 'Lorena%27'}
24th April 2013:
I like your story! :) Like Clare!
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{reviewid: 2782231, reviewer: 'willow1'}
16th April 2013:
so sad. it is depressing. deeply depressing
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{reviewid: 2675230, reviewer: 'Grakmole'}
21st March 2012:
Woah scary like realy scary but the reason it was so scary was because it was believable I still don't quite get we're your going with this story but your a great writer so I'll stick with it. Keep writing :)
Author's Response: I'm working on the fourth chapter right now. The direction of the story should become (hopefully) clearer in a few chapters. I'm glad you like it and find it believable.:)
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{reviewid: 2647998, reviewer: 'Grakmole'}
23rd January 2012:
Wow ouch that must be a bit creepy please more
Author's Response: I working on the 3rd chapter now ... I update ASAP ... I was going for creepy so thanks :-)
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{reviewid: 2647995, reviewer: 'Grakmole'}
23rd January 2012:
It's going well so far but a bit slow
Author's Response: Yah sorry but I needed to have some back round so the story made sense.
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{reviewid: 2594689, reviewer: 'Beth'}
25th September 2011:
check Gryffindor spelling!!!
Author's Response: oh geeze whoops.. I just submitted an updated verzion .. I changed the spelling there so ... yah it should be correct as soon as it gets validated...
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{reviewid: 2594585, reviewer: '19%20whitehorse'}
25th September 2011:
This is my face :D :D ;D :D (my mum is freaking out with all the huge grins)
But that is how I feel when reading your story :D
and your story makes me laugh out loud at moments :D
Great start and update soon :D
Author's Response: Thanks I'll try to update ASAP I try to say things that I laugh at or my friends would laugh at without sounding stupid so... Thanks!!
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{reviewid: 2547637, reviewer: 'Gracie'}
15th July 2011:
Love it love it love you are a amassing writer great attention to detail hope you write more soon
Xoxo Gracie
Author's Response: Thanks a ton!!! I'll try my best to update ASAP
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{reviewid: 2547632, reviewer: 'SpringSinger19'}
15th July 2011:
this was sweet! a little disorganized, if I am being honest :/ and a bit over the place but I loved the running over of harry potter! hahaha that made me smile(: I have a lot of question though. Like how did she know who snape was? oh and it's quidditch. I'm sorry I just had to point that out(; haha but this was cute!
Author's Response: Sorry about the disorganization ... My brain tends to be all over the place he he ... I was thinking that Snape is very famous ... or more like infamous (because who knows the real story) I'm glad you liked the part of Lucy running over Harry. Thanks for telling me how to spell Quidditch ... whoops. Thanks for reviewing!
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