You have no idea how excited I got when I saw a new chapter :)
I love hoe you keep us all hanging on whether or not they get back together :) Report Review
Please please please write again soon! This series is so addicting! I just found it today and have read all three storiesAuthor's Response: Im updating right now :) Report Review
All 3 books in the series were well planned. Perhaps more fulfilling to have the multiple plot lines, but they were not as well developed. They could have been fleshed out more. There would have been greater irony for HP to have been Sev's best man than DM. Also DM story not complete where was his emotion with his dad's domestic violence issue and that Sev killed his Dad in revenge. Too loose to hang together. From author's notes, I realize you are/were in college. You should get a copy of a Journalism style book or a basic grammar reference book. Your grammar is atrocious. You incorrectly assign pronouns. Example "Me and her went to the store." Would be better written as "She and I" or again as "We" or as " Draco and I went ." There is not only a lack of pronoun agreement, there is also a lack of verb tense and verb subject agreement. Proof reading would likely help.Author's Response: Thank you for your constructive criticism. As you pointed out pronouns aren't really my forte. I'm a pretty sucky writer in general, and I know that. I really only did it for my own enjoyment. I probably won't be updating this story again, so I won't be going back and fixing the chapters, but I'll take your criticism and use it for other things I write - if I write anymore. I realized I sucked and gave up lol. Thank you! Report Review
This is amazing!!! Please please please keep writing because I love this story so much:) I have read and reread it multiple times and I enjoy it more each time. Don't worry I will stck with the story till the end!Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm not sure if I will continue it because I lost my motivation and desire, but I will try my best. Report Review
Yay! New chapter! I've waited for this :) So happy you're back! :DAuthor's Response: Not quite back, but thank you Report Review
What happens?! I gotta know! X3Author's Response: If I write more, you will see! Report Review
I don't really know where you've been but, I enjoy your stories, I have followed them since before Daddy Dearest and Baby Boom existed on this site. I don't know what your talking about when you say the chapter would suck. It was, as per usual with your writing, wonderful. You are an amazing writer and author, please keep up the amazing work. Writing a good story isn't about speed, its about writing what comes to your mind. If it takes forever, I'll still be here to read it.Author's Response: Thank you very much for following and for thinking highly of me. I'm not sure if I'll update it, because I lost motivation and desire, but I'll work on it Report Review
Thank you so much for the update! :D But oh my god I hated you at the start of this chapter!!! My heart ugh why do you do this to me? :'( anyway can't wait to see what comes next! xAuthor's Response: Lol, sorry love! Thanks for the review! Report Review
YEY! I got mega excited when I saw a new chapter! I have been checking every so often :D I feel for Alix, I hope it has a happy ending. So glad you have written again, hope your in a much better place! Author's Response: You helped me through it much more than you know my dear. :) I'm glad you liked it! I haven't much decided which direction I'm taking this in, but we'll see where it goes. Report Review
OK SO, every comment that I haven't already made but have been waiting to make is going to be written in this. Warning you now: May take up more than 6000 characters. First, the father. OH MY GOD! Even with your little hints, there was NO WAY IN HELL I have EVER thought it would be Snape!! I mean, that's just a huge surprise! I mean, I thought it was Ron at first, and then those hints about Alix being in Slytherin, the guy being someone she'd known since she was 11, and someone she would have had to run away with to be with, had me thinking it was Draco until I realized that they were all friends now so that idea quickly left my mind and got replaced with Blaise Zabini. I would've sworn on my life it was one of the two. NEVER would I have thought it would have been SNAPE!!! That's just a major surprise. Next, I'm sorry, but as much as I love these Alixzandra Draconis Granger-Snape-Truett stories, I am a major MAJOR Harry Potter fan and believe in doing things by the book and since you so OBVIOUSLY started writing this after the seventh and final book came out (I checked my copy for the year, it's 2007), assuming that you HAVE read the seventh book and since this was written in the Next Generation Era, then Dumbledore should be dead, McGonagall should be headmistress, SNAPE should be dead, and there should be SOME awkwardness between Ron and Hermione since apparently they were dating shortly before her and Snape started dating and hooking up. Also there is a part where Hermione and Snape are reminiscing about when they started going out talking about sneaking around finding places to shag, but originally, either earlier in this book or in Daddy Dearest, it CLEARLY states that Hermione was a virgin the night they had that romantic candlelit dinner, complete with her favorite foods and dancing, and that that was the night that Snape left. Lastly, for this is all I can recall at the moment, Snape was James Potter and Lily Evans' age. He was a teacher ALREADY at Hogwarts when Hermione, Harry, and Ron started at school. It says in The Deathly Hallows that James and Lily were born in 1960, so Severus was too. That makes Severus 20 years older than Harry, Hermione, and Ron, making him 31 when he first met the Trio when they were 11, and if Hermione had Alix at 19 and she's 16 now, that means that he's 55 years old marrying a 35 year old. Don't you think that's a BIT weird? FINALLY, I have to say, I honestly was rooting for Draco and Hermione, or maybe even Draco and Alix. But now, I just really want Alix and Tyler to get back together because they really do love each other and it would honestly break my heart too if he doesn't tell her that he loves her and wants her and only her for the rest of their lives in the next chapter! Sorry this is so long, but I really hope you read all of this and I hope you make my dream a reality because I'm such a big romantic that I swear it will just crush me if it doesn't come true.
Your Faithfully Waiting Servant,
HannahAuthor's Response: 1) Not all stories are written strictly by cannon. Pretty sure I covered in the first chapter that it wouldn't follow the 7th book (meaning Dumbledore's alive, Snape's alive, Hermione and Ron never exculsively dated) 2) Age makes no difference to me. Age matters when you're an immature teenager dating someone who's 30. When you get older, age doesnt hold that much weight. Draco and Alix are 18 years apart. Btw, I toyed around with the idea of Draco & Alix too. ;P 3) Thank you thank you thank you for reading this. Although sometimes your reviews are harsh, pointing out things like Hermione & Snape's mixups help me out a lot. I'm glad you like it. I hope you'll stay with it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review :)
NO! YOU MUST. KEEP. WRITING!Author's Response: Lol i am. Report Review
I've just finished reading the latest chapter of Baby Boom - Jumpstart. But I've read previous stories that go through to this one. I have to say I have really enjoyed reading your stories because it gives an interesting view point and the characters are portrayed really well. I really like the plot twists you have incorporated within the stories it has kept me wanting to read more :) I hope that you will continue with this story because I would really like to find out the conclusion. Thankyou for the time and care you take in writing the chapters and making sure they're well written and I hope to read more of your writing in the future :) Do Severus and Hermione know what is going on between Tyler and Alix or are Alix and Tyler keeping it from them? Will they find out?
Thank you :)Author's Response: Thank you so so much for your very kind review. I'm actually planning on starting writing again tomorrow, to be honest. You'll be my inspiration, how about that? I can't answer your questions, because they'll be answered in a few chapters, if not the next :) Report Review
OKAY!. WHERE. THE. HELL. IS. MY. STORY. .WORK WORK WORK HERE PEOPLE COME ON! LOL JK get a move on though .you havent updated since . FOREVER! . k thats all i had to say here with my little outburst there lol besides the huge major fact that i LOVE your fanfic. its the best and thats saying a lot because i never review or stick around if its not already done .Author's Response: Lol thanks for your overwhelming response! I'm sorry I stopped writing. I just lost inspiration. If you feel like sticking around, though, I'm completely rewriting the series. Maybe I won't think it sucks this time around. ;P Report Review
Please finish this! And please tell me it's going to be a happy ending between Tyler and Alix.Author's Response: Lol Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm sorry I stopped writing. I just lost inspiration when my flashdrive (containing all of my chapters) crashed. If you feel like it, I'm rewriting the entire series. Maybe it won't suck this time ;) Report Review
:( Sorry to hear your having a bad time, Im sure I speak for all your readers when I say we will help you any way we can and no matter how long it takes your to want to write again, be it 5 days, 5 years or 50 years, we will always come back to read it!
I know how it feels to have a bad time, I suffer from depression and have done for going on 12 years, but theres always light at the end of every tunnel! and I always try to make good out of every situation! if you ever want to chat let me know, I can give you my email, facebook, twitter or what ever xxxAuthor's Response: You're an amazing person. I hope you know that. I hope you see that when you look in the mirror and I hope those who are lucky enough to have you in their everyday life value you and realize what they have. Thank you so very very much for your kind words. They meant the world to me. Just for you, I will try my damndest to upload another chapter tomorrow, no matter how long it takes to write it! I miss you, and every one of readers. Thanks for sticking by me no matter what. The same courtesy you extended to me, goes to you. If you need to talk to someone about your depression or just in general, I'm here too. I'll PM you my facebook, tumblr, email, phone number, twitter, anything. Just let me know and I will be there for you! Thank you again so very much for your kind words. Report Review
Any idea when the next chapter will be up? I miss this story :'(Author's Response: Honestly, I can't say. I've lost all desire to write and my life is a hectic mess right now :( Report Review
Yay, a new chapter! I was starting to wonder if I needed to think out my own version and give up... I guess I don't need to now
I just hope the updates will get a bit faster,Author's Response: I'm trying, I promise. :/ There's just a lack of creativity in me as of recent :(( Report Review
YayayayayayayayayayayYayayay!! New chapter :D :DAuthor's Response: :) New one up soon! Report Review
YEY!!! A new chapter and they are on their way to being a couple again! Love it! I do hope you have a nice christmas chapter! Would be nice to see what Mackenzie and the twins first Christmas is like!
I am so glad you updated again and you decided to keep writing! I gave up on my own story a long time ago and part of me regrets it.
I really enjoyed reading this! I love coming online to a new chapter :D
And Im glad Tyler admitted he still cares for Alix!
xxxAuthor's Response: Awww thanks for sticking around and believing in me! I think you should start writing again. Maybe rewrite what you've written. Maybe you've grown as a writer and you'll like it again :3 I'm glad you like the chapter, and I promise I'll get them up LOADS faster from now on! lol. Thanks so so much! Report Review
I FOUND THE SEQUAL :DAuthor's Response: This is the second sequel, just so you know. The first in the series is Mother, May I , the second is Daddy Dearest and the third is Baby Boom.
Just wanted to let you know in case you didnt :3 Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
Yay! That was both for the update and the kinda progress they made :) Ahh I've been checking this for years! Okay I exaggerate but i love this story and dahh why don't they just get together already D: Any way thanks for the update and the story :)Author's Response: Lol. Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and staying with me! It means the world to me, it really does. :)) Report Review
Heyyy again :) I read your response and felt soo great that you liked my review ! I would feel HONORED to pick her name !! I didnt actually think youu were going to do it , but im glad you are :D oh goshhh , I don't know what to name her !! Maybe rachel ? Spencer and Rachel would be kinda cute ;) that's my favorite ... I don't know though ! Maybe Hailey ? Emma ? You can pick out of those if you want I gues :) but don't worry , I won't be offended if you don't like any of thosee :) haha anywaysss , I would loveee you to be my beta if I wrote , but I don't ): I'm thinking of writing a story though sometime soon , so I'll let you know if I do :) okay well , hope you see this review and maybe possibly respond ? Haha I lovvve when authors respondd to my reviewws :) can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: I'm really fond of Hailey, but I like the other too really well too. I would name her Mackenzie since that's your name but that might be wierd since it's Alix & Tyler's daughter's name ;P And just so you know, I always respond to every single one of my reviews, even if it's just to say thanks for reviewing. lol. :) You're a really cool and sweet person! Thanks again!! Report Review
GSHAKXUDNAHSHBSH CAN'T FIND THE RIGHT WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW AMAZING THIS STORY IS !!! I stayed up till 4 in the morning yesterday and now 1 in the morning today to read all 3 stories of yours! And let me tell you, THEY ARE FREAKING AMAZING , like seriously , some of the best I have ever read on this site! guess what my favvv part is ...? MY NAMES MACKENZIE TO ! I was so frickin excited when I saw that Alix and Tyler were naming her that! Hahha sorry I got a little excited about that . Haha , ALIX AND TYLER NEED TO GET BACK TOGETHER , LIKE ASAP ! They are sooo cutteee , MY FAV COUPLE FOR SUREEE !!! spencer is so hilariouss, def another one of my favorite characters ! He's in the story a lottt , but I'm thinkin he needs some more liness ;) haha i think he should get himself a serrrioouus gf that becomes best friends with Alix ?? Maybe , possiblyy ? Haha then again , what do I know about writing a story .. I know you mentioned a few chappiess back that you might stop writing this story , and let me be the first to tell ya , DONT ! You are so talented ,, not only writing 2 finished stories and an almost finished 3rd one , but there is not a SINGLE boring part in any of them ! I don't know how you think of these amazing plots , but somehow you manage !! If only I could write as good as you cann ... ;) haha I lovee how you put that songs at the end of each chappie ,, it's so creative ! I know most of them, so I always find myself singing them in my head as I read the next chapterrr :) hahah YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER , DON'T FORGET THAT! Haha wel ,,, I'm sure you loved reading this loonggg review (well I hoped you did anywaysss) :) I never really write any reviews on stories , so you better feel HONOREDD !! ;) hahah justtt kiddding , but I never write reviews on stories I don't LOVEEE :) CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTERS OUT , great work :)Author's Response: you almost made me cry. Not even kidding. This is singlehandedly the nicest review I've ever gotten and I can honestly say youve inspired me to keep writing it. As a special 'thank you', I wanna write your idea about Spencer's new girlfriend & Alix's best friend. It'll be good for her to spend a lil of her time away from Tyler ;P That being said, I'd like you to pick the name for the girl! :) I do feel soo honored that you reviewed because I rarely get them anymore. I'm glad you love my stories and my writing. It seems that all of my other readers have given up on me so it means a whole lot that I've got you as a new reader ;) Spencer has got to be my third favorite (behind Alix & Tyler, obvs). lol. I love him! I'm pretty sure Alix & Tyler are gonna get back together. I want them to too, but they just dont wanna be. If you write, you know what I mean by that. lol. If you do write, you should let me read some of your work! I'm sure you're a great writer! I'd love to Beta for you if you'd like. I'm so so happy that you like these stories, that I can't even express it. I've been reading over them lately and all I see are a bunch of mistakes, so Im really glad someone sees past all of them! lol. Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you read this reply. If not, and I don't get a name for the character from you, I'll just dedicate these stories to you ;P P.S. This fic is nowhere near over ;P lol. ill try to update soon!
Im having withdrawal symptoms! Hope you manage to get another chapter soon. Sorry to hear you lost everything off your computer! xAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) I've started feeling the need to write again too, so who knows? Right now I'm gonna use the backup thing on here to back the chapters up to my computer again. We'll see! I'm sorry it's taking so long! Report Review
Where's the tissues?!? haha im crying my eyes out right now! please put up the next chapter!!! i cant wait to see how their relationship comes out :)Author's Response: im glad you liked it and it touched you enough to make you cry! However the flashdrive all my stories were on was erased and so itll be awhile. Report Review
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