This one-shot is fantastic. It really is, I thought that the end was so shocking and unexpected! One of the best one-shots I've read. However it might've been better to perhaps put it into 2 chapters and add a little more details here and there. But each to their own I suppose, either way, loved it.Author's Response: I wrote it without that many details so that you could read it in time with the song. Like, the faster the song gets the less I write, so that you can tell that it all gets more suspensful and suspenseful and then. nothing.
It was so fun to write, and I'm glad you liked it~! Report Review
Great Build up. I didn't see it soming. I love how you used the song. It was clever that as the story progressed faster so did the song!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ;) Report Review
oh damn! wat an endingAuthor's Response: Lol, but we don't know if anyone died, do we? Report Review
Ummm... that was confusing and weird, not the best stroy i've read...Author's Response: Oh, sorry. It was just something random I came up with. Hopefully you'll like one of my other stories better. Report Review
Oh my... That was rather good. I liked how it was put together! ^-^
THE SUSPENSE! Who got hit with the killing curse? Rawr I'm going to go nuts not knowing... Or maybe it was both of them... D:Author's Response: Oh, we'll never know that. Or maybe I'll write a sequel. That's an interesting thought. hmm... I'll see... Report Review
Did hermione just die!?!?! What is going on!?!?!Author's Response: THAT is exactly the reaction I was looking for. I have no idea if one or both or none died. My imagination refused to think of more. Odd, isn't it?
That's half the reason I didn't write an authors note at the bottom like I usually do, so there's nothing after the last word. We'll leave the rest to your imagination. Report Review
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