Reading Reviews for The Landscape of a Lie
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Review #1, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Behind the Headlines

1st February 2012:
Oh, this is interesting. I am really wanting to press the next button. I wanna know what happens!

I can't wait to see where you take this; I think I'm already hooked! :D

Author's Response: I'm happy to receive such a review:D

I'll try to update asap!

~ Angie

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Review #2, by Zora Weasley Behind the Headlines

1st February 2012:
this is a really nice introduction. I think it is a great start to beginn with the newspaper, it seems very unique. I haven┤t seen it before on here. so i think it is agreat idea. i really hope to read more of the story. the little bit you wrote already got me interested in it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I will most definitely write more:)

~ Angie

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Review #3, by fixed delusion Behind the Headlines

1st February 2012:
really want to see where it goes from here.

Author's Response: Really happy you do:D

I'll try to update asap!

~ Angie

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Review #4, by javct Behind the Headlines

31st January 2012:
I really liked this!

I don't normally read Next-Generation stories or Rose/Scorpius stories because they tend to be incredibly cliche'd, but this story is very different from what I have read.

I loved the way you wrote this story; it was so uniquely written and made me want to read more. I like it how you didn't introduce the main characters to the story straight away, but gave us an introduction to whom would be in and that there would be scandals and betrayal.

Once again, I really, really enjoyed it. You have actually made me want to read more Rose/Scorpius stories!

I did pick up one small mistake; just thought I should point it out!
Mr/ Roger Davies = Mr. Roger Davies

But great story and good luck with the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words!

I'm very happy to see that you liked the story, and found it original and different from other Rose/Scorpius fics.

Once again, thank you- for pointing out my typo as well:)

~ Angie

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Review #5, by Giola Behind the Headlines

14th June 2011:
Oh you have my intrigued!!

This is such an original idea, you basically changed my perception of several canon characters right there. You've opened up my mind to a whole new realm of possibilities now.
I can't wait to read more, this was such a beautifully written prologue, just the right about of action and tension, you left me wanting more, always a good thing.

A couple of typos:
I have the pleasure to announce *to*you myself, (you didn't have the to)

Congratulations, Ms. Barfield, you are one of the most efficient reporters we had for years. (should be we've had)

Other than that, well done! I'll definitely be favouriting and reading on :D

(Oh, I saw this in the news thread in the Slytherin Common Room, by the way, and since it's your first story I thought I'd have a read. Amazing job for your first story, mine was absolutely atrocious).


Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you very much for giving a shot to my story and for all the good words you have for it. I hope I'll meet my readers expectations with the following chapters.

(Oh, and thanks for pointing out my mistakes; I'm planning to find an editor/beta asap.)

Btw, to be honest this isn't my first story ever; it's simply the first story I'm very serious about and that I'm posting on this site. My first story is on FFnet and it is simply horrible.

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