Well I must say I was really happy to see you've updated! yeey! Well I do love this chapter! The avocado was great! I hope you'll update soon! Report Review
I have really enjoyed this. Please continue! Report Review
This story is still really good and can keep a person hooked (see what I did there? Sorry, I'm not funny :O). Just so you know, it is really good.Author's Response: Hehehe, that actually made me laugh! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
good chapter! :) I think it's funny that everyone thinks Rose is pregnant :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
o what has rose gotten herself into =)Author's Response: I know right! Report Review
This story is AMAZING! I mean, it's really good.
I can't believe Rose would do that. Or Verity.
Anyway, hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thank you :)
Hoping to get the next one up sometime soon! Report Review
hey! thanks for the shout out! =D i felt so special haha. sorry i havnt been keeping up with the story as much but school... yeah. back to reality. =P
i worship a very potter musical. literally the greatest thing ever made.
anyway, i loved this chapter. team rosius all the wayy! haha. i also thought louis was really sweet.
il r/r the next chapter ASAP! love your story =)Author's Response: Thank you! Don't feel you have to read it all the time, I just wanted to thank you for the lovely reviews :) Report Review
loved it!! It's just so funny! i love the end, ah Rose is so nice :)Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I wasn't so sure about this one, but i'm glad you like it :) Report Review
I love it! I love the things Rose thinks :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Al is the BEST CHARACTER EVER!!! McLaggen is SO annoying. I love your writing :) Come on Scorpius, ask Rose to dance! Also I think that the whole pregnancy-thing should come out into the light :DAuthor's Response: Hehe, Al's one of my favourites too :) You read my mind, just wait and see for the next chapter (which will be short, but will be soon) and thank you :) Report Review
poor scorp :(. mclaggen is so annoying! more soon please :DAuthor's Response: I rather sort so too, Like father like son...and thank you very much :) Report Review
This is an amazing story! I understand you're busy, and that you have a life outside of this website, but I absolutely LOVE this story. It kills me when I check if there's a new chapter, and there's not. I'm not trying to pressure you into writing more, just expressing my love for this. xDAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :)
I am really trying to do more writing in my spare time and the next one will be up really soon i'm sure! Report Review
this is amazing! it was really funny and creative, keep it up & post soon!Author's Response: Thank you!
I am really trying my best to get as much writing done as possible :) Report Review
OMG I LOVE THIS!!! OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!Author's Response: Thank's :D
Glad you have such enthusiasm! Report Review
I absolutely loved it. Best chapter till now :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
oh, I love Louis :)
I also LOVE AVPM and AVPS, best Youtube thing EVER. It's 'inconspicuous' if you mean subtle, and not attracting attention. Conspicuous means the opposite. I adore your story, by the way. I'll try to leave more reviews. Ever since I started writing my own stories I've been wanting reviews so badly that I feel like a bad person if I don't leave any for other people :(Author's Response: Oh I'm glad you like Louis, I wish I had someone like him around in real life...I'm finding it really hard to not slip in a reference to pigfarts in the story! I will check out your story and send people along your way :D Report Review
i loved how you had the rose 4 life 1 at the beginning it was a nice touch =) rest of the chapter was also good!Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Oh no, another McLaggen! *buries face in hands* They are such pains-in-the-you-know-what. Albus is being stupid, Scorpius should've asked Rose to the ball, and Fred is (unfortunately) oblivious. Overall, fantastic story, PLEASE keep writing :DAuthor's Response: Urgh Mcglaggen, pains me to write about him but it has to be done. The next chapter will see that al gets whats coming to him and I'm pretty sure there's gonna be some rose/scorpius stuff...
again, really great.
a description of Scorpius's hot bod is always welcome hahahaha ;)Author's Response: haha, thank you :) Report Review
i like how how you include a lot of the cousins... you don't usually see roxy and fred as major parts and its very nice that you did
also, rose and scorpius's banter is really hilarious.
you're doing a good job =) definitely adding to favorites!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah I really like the other characters so I feel there's alot J.K gave us to work with :) Report Review
im thoroughly enjoying this. scorpius = hottie with a body ;)Author's Response: Thanks :) One of the Malfoys ought to be blessed with good looks... Report Review
I really liked it. Please update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you! Will try my very best to update but i'm on holiday for the next week (as I have been this past week) so bear with me :) Report Review
Love this story Please continue Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
OMG Awesome. Funny. Update cus i keep checking for more :DAuthor's Response: Thank you, so lovely to hear your thoughts :D Report Review
i effing love it! update! omg i love it!Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
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