loving this story. can't wait to read more! Report Review
i love your story, the idea behind it is original, yet somehow classical. if i might suggest something, try characterizing Draco as a little less condescending and a bit more human in his actual thoughts. His actions are prefectly aligned with his character, but if he were a bit more vulnerable it would make it a lot more easy to sympathize with his rather untoward nature. lovee your story though, update soon! x Report Review
This is amazing! I really like how you have characterised Draco. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (: Report Review
WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!Author's Response: It's up now! Report Review
Love this! Like the style of language also, it's very sifisticated and descriptive. Also did you get the idea from the 12 dancing princesses? Report Review
i love this story! i think u really got draco's personality down :) Report Review
PLEASE keep writing this story, your diction is actually sophisticated and I want to see the budding romance unfold between Hermione and Draco. Love your stuff, well done! Report Review
OMG its brill!!! you have to write another chapter! i HAVE to know what happens next!
you are a fantastic writer! Report Review
bloody fantastic, first bit of fan fiction I've read and it's amazing. Not quite in the style of JK Rowling, and it looks like you're going for something like that, but don't try, this is good as well. Love the suspense, you know how to keep a reader hooked:) Report Review
Great chapter! I enjoyed it very much. I cant wait for the next chapter! 10/10 Report Review
Interesting tale about the origins of the nightly event. I am curious to see where the story will go from here. Will a lone Slytherin eventually dare to penetrate the Gryffindors' secret event? Good job! :) Report Review
Another great chapter. You made it easy for me to visualize Hermione trading her everyday robes for a beautiful gown and going out to enjoy herself for the night. Great work! Report Review
I love the 12 Dancing Princesses :) Interesting concept for a story, and well written at that. Looking forward to reading more! Report Review
interesting.. nicely paced and the mature rating means there will be more to the clothing, yes?
update soon. Report Review
Well, yes, I definitely liked this one, too ... though for some reason I didn't see it was up already the last time ... strange!
Oh my ... it'll be interesting to see how these two will go on about this matter ... Report Review
love the twelve dancing princesses story, looking forward to a harry potter twist. Report Review
This story is great! Can't wait to read more! Report Review
I really like this story. I am so looking forward to Hermione's reaction when she finds Draco locked in her room surrounded by dresses ^^Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! Hopefully you enjoyed chapter 3 as well! x Report Review
It looks like the master strategist has first blood. Oh well, never mind; except I do though! You, Slytherin that you are, have left us hanging. How I'll be able to wait patiently for the grand denouement, is beyond me. I'll try to bear up under the pressure. Your story is so, so, moreish. Looking forward to your next posting. Please, make it as soon as possible!Author's Response: What a beautifully lyrical review! Thank you very much, I'll try and get the next chapter up this week! x Report Review
I love it already! To have a pair of tricksters trying to best one another is a treat. Draco is a tad hypocritical though as he always brands Hermione a teachers pet; then sucks up to Professor Snape to wrong foot her and gain an advantage. Oh alright then, he's a clever boy! I'm just rooting for a sister is all. I'm glad there's another chapter and also because you write really long ones! May you always do so.Author's Response: Well, I think Slytherins always assume that they are different enough from the others not to be held accountable to the same labels. Anyway, thanks for the review! x Report Review
I love it! It moves really well and has good grammer! Please update as fast as you possibly can.
9/10Author's Response: The grammar nazi in me is thrilled! Glad you're enjoying it! x Report Review
I love the twelve dancing princesses! I like this story alot so far, keep up the good work. I'm going to the second chapter now :)
8/10Author's Response: I know, it's such a good fairytale, isn't it? Thanks for the review! x Report Review
So this chapter was interesting. I liked it better than the first one, my only problem is I want to know where exactly she's going off to. I really like it though, and can't wait for the next chapter. and I think the hidden compartment in the closet is really cool. but it makes me think of Narnia, which is weird. but I do like how this story has started. Hopefully now, there will be more action.Author's Response: Well, Narnia is always a win. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and hopefully there'll be more action in future. x Report Review
I think it is really good thus far. I like the story and the suspence, I also like the plotting. I just feel like it is slightly slow. Not that the plot is slow, but the way it is presented seems slower than I like, but it is not so bad as to be boring in any way. I do really like it , and I am quite sad there is only one other chapter, but I decided that I was for once going to read a story that was just started and leave a review because I know that when I write I like having reviews so leaving reviews to others is my way of telling the universe to give me reviews as well when I just start a story.
Anyway this story is good, and I will hopefully try to keep up with it when it is updated, but I might not get back to it until it is quite a few more chapters in.Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it - and sympathy to you on the reviewing front, I'll try and have a look at yours when I get a chance. x Report Review
I've read almost all your stories, and I've loved them all! This is another one to add to my list now! I haven't read the story this is based off of, so I'm going crazy trying to figure out what exactly is going on! XD Your writing is amazing and keeps me hooked, so keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much, this is such a sweet review! I'll carry on trying to live up to expectations. x Report Review
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