I like this, it's interesting, funny and really well written. Look foward to seeing reading more!! Report Review
I like it. Like, really. It made me laugh and I'm looking forward to where it goes.
(Good god, I hate saying 'where it goes'. It sounds like some really cheesy love song that simultaneously makes me want to cry for being forever lonely and shoot myself in the head for actually listening to it.)
Anyways. Yes, I like the characters and yeah. Is 'Shuntbumps' actually real game? Snort.
UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
(I completely get what you mean. I've always thought first chapters have much 'potential', but whenever I say it, it's just like... *cringe*)
I'll be introducing some other characters later. I hope you like them, too. And yeah, Shuntbumps is a real game. It's mentioned in Quidditch Through the Ages. Report Review
I wouldn't have even realised that English wasn't your first language :) This seems like a new idea and I would definitely like to read more. I cannot believe that he did not put her on the team, what a big betrayal!
Update soon.Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I'm aiming for.
And Louise completely agrees with you. Report Review
I really enjoyed this and would love to read more!Author's Response: Thank you!
More is coming :) Report Review
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