Oh, this is so sad. It was written in a very matter of fact tone, which made it seem all the more hard hitting. (No pun intended). The twist of her being 5 months pregnant made it seem even more sad. I really felt for her. I did smile when you said about the cat because that basically described one of my cats! :P
I wasn't actually familiar with the song, but I think that the lyrics fitted in really nice with the rest of the story. The addition of Fleur being on the other side of the phone was really cute, and I liked how she was on her way over to Dom. :)Author's Response: Thank you for your review, once again ^^ It makes me smile that someone likes this one. I'm really happy about that. I worked hard to make Domi and Scorpius work, so I decided to make it a twist. :) I'm really glad you liked it! Fleur loves her little girl very much (: Report Review
I can't believe I missed my review for this story! Oh my goodness, this was just wow. It fit perfectly. I even feel as though I may cry a little. Great job.
~KatAuthor's Response: Aww thank you. The original version is MUCH better. But sadly my computer broke so I losst it. Thank you for the wonderful review!! :] Report Review
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