Aw! That was so adorable! I liked the idea a lot, and it was really nice to read. I think your writing is great, I loved how you compared so many things to the flower (loved the flower idea by the way), and how James knew exactly where she was before the wedding. It was just really cute, and well-written and awesome. I see a lot of potential in your writing. Great job! I see great things in store for you on HPFF ;D
And... I'd love it if you would R&R my fanfic "Darkest Night." It's a Dramione, so I don't know if you're really into that, but it would mean a lot if you r&r'd! Thank you!
Keep writing ~ flufff
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This story is amazing. I love the flow of it, and it's quite perfect. I've never really been a big fan of James Potter II but after reading both of your one-shot. You've changed my mind. You must write more.
Oh yeah, this story deserve an amazing banner to go with it. You can request banner at the-dark-arts. I can't put link it is [dot] net. If you need any help, I have an account there with the same name as my pen name, just pm me or leave a comment.
They have a bunch of amazing artist there, I can recommend you with some. Hope to read more amazing story from you.
Good luck with getting the banner.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I actually got a banner for "Surprises", but I still neew one for "Yellow is the Color..." so I will definently look you up! Report Review
So I reviewed your other one-shot and got curious , so here I am !
That was the cutest story ever! I loved it! The characters, the omnipresence of the flower and its symbolic, and the realism. I love how the story is realistic and relatable, how it is simple ...
You should have developed it though! I can totally see it as a novella, or a collection of one-shots. You could make it longer with dialogues, and more descriptions, more thoughts. You really have the potential to make several chapters stories :).
Ps: you should request banners if you want more readers(people are attracted to shiny things haha) , because your stories definitely deserve more reviews .
XxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! It was actually originally a school piece that I adapted! If you could tell me how to request a banner that would be awesome! Report Review
That was really cute :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
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