What a neat story!
I really liked how you took Gilderoy and Mafalda's characters and mushed them together. I also liked how you showed a snippet of his ever-so-fascinating life as a wizard up against such Dark and horrific creatures. If only this story came with his autograph! Haha. But it was a different fic, and I really enjoyed it.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm guessing by Mafalda you are meaning Miranda? It was a fun snippet to write, I find the odd unique characters are most fun to write. Gilderoy would gladly give you his autograph but yeah he's in a loony bin now so it might be a bit difficult to attain now. lol. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really like this! Mirandas voice came through clearly in the story, and I thought it was touching that she knew what would happen, and used it as a way to forget. It was also good how Jared being killed was added in. But, I can't help but think that Lockheart wouldn't write a story about how a vampire called Marek. But, I suppose genders can easily be changed... It's just an entertaining thought ^_^.
Some of the sentences were very long, however, and i think it would be good to insert some commas, or shorten some of the sentences.
Overall, a good, cute fic :)
LeanneAuthor's Response: I will be looking into editing the chapter a bit more. Thanks for the review! I am glad you like it! It was a fun and interesting one to write. There are certain ideas of what Glideroy will write I'm inclined to think that there was a rescue of a damsel in distress from Lockhart's perspective. Report Review
Hi scooter :),
First off, the plot of this story is so wonderful. I never really thought about the process that Gilderoy went through to get the stories that he told, so thank you for giving me that to think on.
Second off, considering the conditions that you were given, I love what you came up with(but you're scooter, so I'm not surprised).
I can't say yet, but your story is definitely up for consideration :)
~webetaAuthor's Response: Yay I'm glad you like it! I'm also glad I cleaned up the typos just before you read it. I tend to like to tell the odd stories of things people wouldn't expect.
Also I'm glad I gave you something to think on, I love giving people food for thought. I'm glad you like what I came up with, I'm honored that it's a "but you're scooter thing" it makes me blush.
Even if I get knocked out of the running by some of the others who are in the challenge it was a fun thing to write and I thank you for the challenge and inspiration. Report Review
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