This story is fantastic I started crying at the end actually I'm still crying that was so SAD! It's just the perfect summary of everything that happened. I felt the story moved to fast and I would have liked it to last a little longer but the way you made the end was fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am thrilled you liked it especially because it is my first!

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oh my goodness . .. they all just . . died. and then . . and then . . they were looking down on him . . .and excuse me . . .

Author's Response: I am not sure I understand this review fully... did you like the ending?

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IM DYYINNNGG!! OMMR!!! but it wasn't really on May 6, was it?

Author's Response: It was deff May 2. J.K. Rowling said that it was also Victorie's birthday a year later because she was "their victory" for making it through the battle the previous year.

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NO why are they al breaking up?? And hey, I noticed that you never mentioned Frank or Alice or Marlene . . .

Author's Response: I never realized I did that before whoops. Maybe if I re-edit I'll fix it thanks for letting me know!

Em

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ohh DAYUMMM!!! Until WHAT?!

Author's Response: Keep Reading! haha

Em

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awww . . . poor James :(

Author's Response: It will get better I promise!

Em

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But . . . . he was sitting on her bed. And then she says "he starts walking toward me again" . . . and now there's dancing involved?
I AM SO CONFUSED!!!

Author's Response: No dancing just an escape

Em

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well, it's not that bad because like, everyone knows James likes her, so obviously he would help her . . .

Author's Response: It gets better I promise!

Em

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i like it so far!! the last one i read made no sense, was written horribly, and was uncreative. Double Trouble by Pheonix something or other. blech. this is much more promising!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Please keep reading and reviewing :)

Em

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Wow this story is amazing! XD

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Please keep reading and reviewing!

Em

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Wow Sirius is such a "GREAT" friend!

Author's Response: Keep reading and reviewing! You will see!

Em

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That was so beautiful! I just read this from start to finish in two hours! I couldn't put it down! I cried for the last part (tears of joy of course!) and I love the whole circle of love thing! ( you don't mind if I use the idea but a bit different in one of my fan fics? I'll credit you of course!) I hope you keep writing more stories! I'll read everyone!

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for all of the love! I appreciate it so much :) I don't mind if you use the circle of love part with credit to me haha. What is your name on the site so I can read your stories as well. Also, I have one story started if you would like to read that as well :) Thank you again!

Em

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Friends with benefits, eh?

Author's Response: I am really enjoying your comments haha. Keep reading and reviewing!

Em

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R U GIVING US HINTS IN THE STORY

Author's Response: You shall see haha :) Keep reading and reviewing!

Em

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Hello! I love this story! I think the beginning goes a little too fast, but other than that it is wonderful!

KEEP WRITING :D

Author's Response: Sometimes you need to fast forward... Keep with me

Em

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This Story Was Amazing I Loved The End (I Even Teared Up Reading Some Of It) And All Of The James And Lily Moments You Are An Amazing Writer :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate this review! I am writing a new story as we speak!

Em

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Oh my god. This is so cute. It made me cry tears of joy! Amazing, absolutely amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review!

Em

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TMy heart shattered a bit at the line " a secret kiss at midnight" i screamed and i explained it to my friend and she said that was adorable. I love story and am very glad u finished i am look forward for a new one.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I am working on one as we speak!

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omg i am crying. i feel so sad about how everything ended! There is one thing i hate about James/lily fan fictions! They always have to die. I hate it! You get to know the characters and then POOF! They are all gone! But over all the story was really good! 9/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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I love this story and have looked dailey for updates since chapter 21 I cant believe it is over. It was an amazing story i will look for future stories. This was amazing jo would be proud.

Author's Response: Oh my God saying the Queen would be proud of me is one of the greatest compliments I have ever gotten! You are so sweet! I am writing more as we speak so please check back with me!

Em

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i love this story so much! thankyou for finishing it :) i will continue to watch for your future fanfics. you are an amazing writer so don't stop :)
Happy Writing!
mwa

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I definitely will not stop :) I am writing as we speak!

Em

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OMG.
I LOVED THE ENDING.
it made me teary. it was so beautiful!!!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much! I am starting a new one soon and I hope you read that one too!

Em

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Loved the story! Thanks for posting it!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Em

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I don't think I've reviewed before, but I've been reading this for a while and I think it really good. Good plot, good characters, good story line, and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much :) I have my last chapter up in review and I do hope you continue to read along!

Em

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OMFG!! I am gnna cry

Author's Response: Stick with me please! Another chapter is up and the last is waiting for Review!

Em

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