2 Reviews Found
Review #1, by katkaaax3 Are We Going Back Or Not?
27th July 2011:
love it :3 it is a really good start cant wait for more :D :D :D

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Review #2, by petitesorciere Are We Going Back Or Not?
30th May 2011:
When you're reading the first chapter of a story that hasn't been reviewed yet, it's always a bit of a gamble - you never know whether it'll be any good or not. Fortunately, I'm really glad I read this one - I think there's going to be so much that you can do with this, and I'm really interested to see where you take the characters wit this. You've managed to get all the characters fairly spot on, and it was nicely descriptive without being overly flowery. The one thing I would say is to pay attention to the spelling and grammar. I know what it's like - you get so wrapped up in typing quickly that some things just skip by. I would suggest maybe getting a beta just to check the grammar over. But overall, an excellent first chapter!

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