great. :D Report Review
honestly, it's a great beginning. Report Review
Great Job! When is the next chapter coming out... Report Review
Kewl!!! Report Review
This is so cool. Well done. Harry should definitely stand up to UV more often. Report Review
I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have to continue. I just have one question. If Harry 18 shouldn\'r he be done with school? ~ Katrina :^P Report Review
Hey, that was a really good story. Do you have any more parts to it? I want to see Harry and Hermione get together, I think they\'d be a really cute couple. You\'re a really good writer because your able to send emotions through your writing - hope you get what I mean, it\'s kinda hard to explain. Good Luck -- and --- Gimme More! Report Review
hey hey, i liked this story!! definetly(sp?) keep writing!! oh and btw!! thanks sooo much for ur review for \"It\'s time to move on\" your review even made me decide that i might continue this story sometime, i dont know when (b/c of school :-( ) but i will start brainstorming for ideas! If you have any ideas u can email me and i\'ll give credit to ya and stuff lol, omg i talk a lot lol, well great story! ttyl! Report Review
go Hermione, i like harry/hermione since they go so well together, please can you review my \'the ivory dragon,\' please get another chapter up, thanks, cassie Report Review
A powerful beginning. The text is fresh, and flows well with what we have already seen from OoTP. I hope to see more of this soon Report Review
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