Just to let you know, I'm WolfieAli from the forums. Finally I've gotten round to reviewing this.. so sorry it took so long.
I've never read a story that explores the concept of Crookshanks being an animagus before, so this was definitely something very new for me to read. I really did like this idea however, and you couldn't help but feel for Hermione. She had no idea.. and obviously adored her cat.
I thought having the letter was a brilliant idea also. Having Crookshanks explain himself was needed. Just out of interest do you intend to have any more chapters? If you do I'm definitely reading them, I want to see how it ends.
I couldn't see any mistakes which is brilliant and I seriously love the concept of this story :) Thank you so much for entering it into my challenge and allowing me to read it.Author's Response: Sorry its taken so lon to respond to this. I will b writing more of this story very soon I hope. Real lifehas just forced me into a break from hpff for a bit. Thanks for the kind review. Report Review
Hehe, what a novel little story. It is a very creative idea and quite ironic considering Ron's history with Scabbers.
You write very well and fluently. There was a nice level of detail in here to fully establish the surroundings that greeted Hermione and her first assumptions on the man she was meeting. I like how these initial thoughts changed as she read the letter.
For a first chapter, it is really good at setting up a little mystery and intrigue and it caught my attention. Your grammar was also really good. Well done. Report Review
Very creative! I like it!Author's Response: Thanks a lot, there's more to come. Report Review
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