ha! that was brilliant - wonderfully written and beautifully executed, especially the bit at the end.
bravo!

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Hahahaha, charming story. Thank you!

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Hahaha doesn't he become head boy aswell! I bet lily would be cursing herself! Really good one-shot and an amazing idea. I love James and lily pairings so much :)

Author's Response: He sure does! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for the review! I greatly appreciate it. :)

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Christine

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I thought this was really cute! It was charming and funny! Great one-shot!

Author's Response: Thanks much! I greatly appreciate the review, and I'm glad you found it funny!

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Christine

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That's so cute! Nice job! I wish you were a bit more descriptive but all the same I absolutely love the plot. I'm so glad you wrote this!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I actually did play around with adding in more description, but I found it messed with the comic timing of the piece. But thanks so much for the feedback, and hopefully on my next one-shot I can come up with a better balance. Cheers!

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Christine

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Little do James and Lily know...! I haven't read a James/Lily story in so long - I ended up getting tired of them, but they used to be my favorite - but I really enjoyed reading this! I love how you portrayed all of the marauders. It's exactly what I would have expected them to be like: careless, witty, and a bit silly :P Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I can definitely understand where they can get redundant, but I'm glad you enjoyed this one! And I appreciate the comment on the Marauders--they're a hard bunch to capture, and I'm glad you found it accurate! Thanks again!

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Christine

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