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Review #1, by Deltaris Chapter 4

6th July 2011:
The flow and progress of the story is wonderful. And I can see bits and pieces of Zoe coming together neatly, and I'm liking it so far. There are so many questions I want answers to right now; I can't wait for your update! Good job (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad that you like how this story is coming along. :)

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Review #2, by Deltaris Chapter 2

6th July 2011:
You can certainly see more of Zoe's personality in this chapter. I think that's really important, especially for an OC involved with established characters.

And you've got me very curious about the Alexander/Olga dynamic and the backstory there. I'm very interested to see how this bet plays out. Onwards (:

Author's Response: Hm, I'm going to bring up that backstory slowly in my story. It's something I really liked developing because it was so much fun to create. :D

Thanks for leaving a review!

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Review #3, by Deltaris Chapter 1

6th July 2011:
I'm enjoying this so much so far. I didn't get a good feel for Zoe for most of the chapter, but it feels like her personality is coming out more near the end.

There are a few typos, but other than that the writing was smooth. Onwards to the next chapter! (:

Author's Response: Thank you! Alright, you're bringing up a good point. I'll have to go through this chapter again then and see what I can do to improve the beginning. :)

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Review #4, by Annabel Potter Chapter 3

27th June 2011:
have u given up on this story??? :(

Author's Response: No, I haven't. Sorry for being slow on updating. But I promise that I'm still working on it. :)

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Review #5, by Annabel Potter Chapter 3

14th June 2011:
it,s amazing please write more!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll try to update as soon as possible, next week if I can. It makes me very happy to hear that you like it. :)

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