Reading Reviews for The Outsiders
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Review #1, by Olivia Journey

7th October 2012:
oh Lupin!
So when is this set? And what is she, exactly? I want to see her turn into a dog.
If she is a werewolf, Lupin should have an accident by not taking his potion and she'll be all, no worries I'll save my... can I use the b-word? I don't know so I won't :)
Byeee (and update!)

Author's Response: Sorry for being 3 years late in replying :D thank you for the review! This is supposed to be set in the 80s/90s I guess and it's supposed to be Lupins first teaching job. Leslie is actually a werewolf, which is why Lupin was specifically sent to meet her. :)

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 Journey

4th February 2012:
Another good chapter. I find myself wondering if your main character is your version of Harry? What with the feelings of untrustworthy that she'd felt when she had touched prof Moon's hand. 9/10 and plz update soon.

Author's Response: Yey! Thank you so much for reading on! Glad you enjoyed! Artemis isn't at all my version of Harry - they've just both had a bad upbringing so are a little suspicious of people actually being nice to them. I'm going to try and update as soon as possible, but will probably have to do a bit more planning. I have a vague idea of where this story is going already, but I have to do a little more research into it. Anyway, thanks again!!

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Letter

4th February 2012:
One of the best starts to a story that I've seen for a long time. I wonder who exactly this person is? She sounds so mysterious. I must move on. 9/10.

Author's Response: Cheers!! I was trying to make Artemis sound mysterious whilst I was writing this - I'm glad it worked! :)

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Review #4, by Nitenel (not logged in) Letter

29th May 2011:
You've Gotten my attention!

I'm really looking forward to wherever this is going to go!


Author's Response: Thanks! Although I may not be updating for a while as I am writing several stories (not all on here) at the same time! :)

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