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Review #1, by Pretense Of Perfection My Dearest Lythia

9th July 2014:
Awww, this was a very poignant and melancholy story, but it's sort of got a hopeful message as well. I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, which is always a good thing. The plot was excellent, and the pacing was perfect. I really liked how your MC wrote her daughters name several times, it really reinforces the love that she feels for her child. It's so sad that she can't raise her daughter, but being a woman myself, I understand sometimes there are better situations for a child to be in. I think the mother asking for forgiveness and taking the time to explain everything is just so sweet, and I know you can't say, but I can't help but wonder who Lythia's parents are. I may just have to check out the companion story. With that being said there were a few parts I was confused about, but again, I get that this story is supposed to be mysterious in nature, so I'll just leave it at that and go on to read the rest of the story when I get some free time. Amazing job, you really pulled me in by just giving me a tease of what this is all about. Amazing!!

--house cup 2014 review--
pretense of perfection, gryffindor

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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Review #2, by MoonLily_ My Dearest Lythia

13th December 2011:
This is so mysterious! I can't wait to read your novel and find out who you are writing about. Very well written, loving it!

Happy Holidays from Slytherin House!

Author's Response: Thank you :D Its been a while since I've updated my novel, but I'm working on it ;)

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Review #3, by LilyFire My Dearest Lythia

22nd August 2011:



Wow, Christy. I don't really know what to say. It's wonderful. Honestly, I think I can guess who Lythia's Aunt and her parents are, but I won't ;) I do have one question that you may be able to answer: Does this tie in with the Novel?

Anyway, it really is beautiful :) I love it. It's packed full of subtle emotion, and just...wonderful. It's great!

Author's Response: Yes it does. It was really great to write. 500 words exactly! :D

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Review #4, by TrevorTheToad My Dearest Lythia

20th August 2011:
Awww... this is sweet. You should expand on this, since I think it could make a wonderful story.

Author's Response: I really can't say much about this piece because I'm trying not to give away spoilers ;)

Thanks for Reviewing!

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Review #5, by flufff My Dearest Lythia

20th August 2011:
Aww.. that was really sweet. I love the manner of the letter, and how her mother writes... It's really well-written, I have to say :D I think that you could expand on this, maybe, if you wanted to. Well, I'd definitely read it. Love your writing style, it's great. I'd love to see more from you! ;D

Also... if you ever have some extra time, could you R&R my fanfic "Darkest Night"? I would really appreciate it! Thank you!

Keep writing! you're awesome :D ~flufff

Author's Response: I would love to give you a good answer to your review about this, but unfortunately I don't want some of my fans looking through my reviews to figure out what this is a spoiler to ;)

I'll see if I can get to it. If you really want something good to read, check out my novel! Thanks for the review, and I'll favourite your story so I can get to it later :)

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