Reading Reviews for A Life Almost Lived
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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Enemies, Friends, and Strangers

4th February 2012:
Another great chapter. you certainly know how to surprise a person. I rather expected Snape to be a bit more stricter with McGonagall since he knows about her activities with the order. And who is the person at the end?
I have to give you another 10/10 and ask for another update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had difficulties writing about Snape because we know the truth about him but McGonagall doesn't... As for the person at the end, I can't give away all my secrets! I should be updating soon.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 To Turn Back Around

18th December 2011:
I wonder if things ever developed further for Minnie? If I remember rightly, I think that she had married at some point in her life because I'm sure I remember her being called Mrs at some point.
A nice chapter and 10/10. And plz update soon.

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm working on a few surprises for the next few chapters! I should be updating soon though. Thank you so much for all of your reviews, I really appreciate them!

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Broken Dreams

18th December 2011:
I don't think you went to far out on a limb with two flashbacks. I think they went together quite well.
Minnie kind of surprised me in this chapter. I never realised she could have had a carefree attitude. 10/10 and moving on.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to work with her character to determine what made her into the professor that we know in the books.

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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 Cavalchina Bardolino

17th December 2011:
It can be amazing sometimes how one little thing can bring back memories. The discription of the journey that MacGonagall took was quite good, I could picture it. Though my Italian is non exsistant. 10/10.

Author's Response: Lugano was one of my favorite places that I've ever been so I thought I'd start Minerva's journey there. Thank you for the review!

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Review #5, by magicmuggle01 An Unanswered Question

29th May 2011:
Another good chapter. I'm wondering what excitment you have planned for your next chapter. Another 10/10 and please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm working on the next chapter now. I'm trying to show McGonagall in a different light by bringing out her more adventurous side. I'll try to update soon!

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Review #6, by magicmuggle01 Past and Present Grief

29th May 2011:
I take it that the young girl mentioned at the end is McGonagall's daughter? A well written first chapter written with alot of feeling. 10/10 and onto the next chapter.

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Review #7, by Izzymom Past and Present Grief

23rd May 2011:
Good job. This is a good beginning to a story Iook forward to reading.

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