Im don't know why but when you asked to guess how old you r the number 23 popped into my head. Am I even close? Lol, loved the story and they're point of views are so funny:)

Author's Response: 23? No, you're miles off! That's actually pretty hilarious. Guess much, much lower!

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Yay, an update! Another good chapter :) Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

Author's Response: So am I! I haven't quite got the whole plot worked out, but I've got an idea!

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keep up the amazing work. love it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to keep up my standard.
And to anyone out there, any ideas what age I am?

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I really like the idea of your story. It has a lot of potential :) I am waiting eagerly for chapter two!

- Innocent Luminere

ps. I loved the last line ;)

Author's Response: Glad you think my story has a lot of potential. But why does everyone like that last line so much? Is it because it's a naughty word?
To be honest, though, I don't care, because I'm glad you like it.

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Ooh, this should be interesting! Great story idea :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm literally glowing with pride, and I'm so pleased people like this. If you do have any criticism, then let me know, though, as it helps me improve.

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Very intriguing. Love the last line. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you find it 'intriguing'. If you have any criticism, though, then let me know.

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wow. suspenseful. i look forward to reading the rest 9/10. good introduction :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really pleased that you gave it 9/10, and that you think it's suspenseful. Enjoy the rest!

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