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Review #1, by Hocruxhunter Developments

31st July 2011:
Great chapter keep it up...just will like to see the plot progressing a little bit more...

Author's Response: Yeah, the plot will pick up. I'm trying to keep true to the characters and time frame, as well as their age. Seventeen year old's don't necessarily understand their feeling's etc. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by Victory_4_Victoire Developments

23rd July 2011:
YAY! You're back!! Laura's back!! Albus' back!! I can't tell you how happy I am! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Vic :)

Author's Response: Great to hear :) Yeah, I've been really busy. I got a second job which leaves me little free time to write. But I am plunking away at the next chapter between work and episodes of Smallville :D Thanks for the reviewing, it's good to hear that you are enjoying it!
~Alex


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Review #3, by Victory_4_Victoire Snubbed

5th July 2011:
Hi, I just want to say that this story is soo good, it's refreshing. I also wan't to say that this story is a little freaky. It's freaky because my name is laura, I have brown hair and I'm a proud member of Hufflepuff. A little freaky, but soo so cool :) Keep going!! This is interesting and I have a feeling it's going to become even more so. Awesome!
Vic :)

Author's Response: Wow, that is a little freaky! I picked the name Laura because I've always found it feminine sounding but for a very strong and independent woman. I really hope I can keep it up with this story. As of now I am trying really hard to keep it on the straight and narrow and avoid as many cliches as possible. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by Hocruxhunter Laura Smith

6th June 2011:
Wow you're a great writer! I can't stop reading this! I am like so anxious for the next chapter!!! I hope you update soon! I really loved how akward it got between al and Laura! Lol this was teay a well written chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot! I'm currently writing the next chapter and it should be posted within a week. I really wanted to make it natural between Al and Laura. She's a very up-front kind of girl, very down to Earth, and Al like his father is a bit of a hero without realizing it. Thanks for reviewing!
~Alex


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Review #5, by Hocruxhunter The Damage Done

6th June 2011:
Wow this is great! Usually I don't like next-gem stories much because the plot starts to get messed up but I cab honestly say that this is a great story and the summary of the story got me hooked onto it! Keep on going with this story!

Author's Response: Thank you :) The summary covers a part of the story that comes much later, but I had hoped that would get some kind of interest in the story :) Thanks for reviewing!
~Alex


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Review #6, by NextGenna14 The Damage Done

30th May 2011:
I really like this!!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's the first thing I've written in ages. Thanks for reviewing!
~Alex


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