OMG! A great addition to a great story! I will be waiting for more! Keep up the amazing work,
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Hello! This is a really great story! I really like it and think you are a great writer. The idea is very original and interesting, it makes me want to read more. The grammar is near perfect, much better than a lot of the stuff on here (no offense to anyone)! You are really good at this and I can't wait for the next installment of this story! Please please,please do not abandon it! It is great (as I've said before) and definitely worth keeping with. And I don't want to be one of those annoying people who keep pushing the writer to finish quickly, so take your time! Just know that I'm out there, waiting excitedly to devour the rest of this story! :) Can't wait!
Can't wait to find out what happens with Riddle and Hermione. Will Draco slip in to the past with her to continue spying for the Dark Lord? Will you show what Harry and Ron are thinking of her absence? What will become of her new colored eyes? Will more traits spring up? I'm sure you have lots of good stuff planned. These aren't necessarily suggestions, more like eager questions and speculations of your fan over here.
Anyways, I encourage you to keep writing and creating stories. I will definitely be keeping up with this one, and any others you may write. Keep up the great work!
PS: Although I would like to be, I'm not a member of this site so I don't have any stories or a username. This is just a name I'm signing with! :)
PPS: Oh, this is a review for the overall story so far, not just Chapter 2: Back to Hogwarts. I just couldn't find where you are supposed to review for the whole thing! :)Author's Response: Oh, wow! I am at a loss for words. Your review has completely overwhelmed me! No one has given me such a full, interesting, and supportive review like this! I really do appreciate it!
I've had the story idea for a while, and from what I've seen, there aren't many Tom Riddle/Hermione stories, therefore, I was compelled to write my own! I strive to make it the best I can, but even I can make mistakes! While I have no plans to abandon it, keeping up during school months can be rough! But I plan on doing what I can in my free time so I can put the story out there. I have too many plans for this story to let it go!
I'll be truthful, I had no plans for Draco to reappear in such a way in the future. I merely gave him a role because he is one of my favorite characters. Originally, the story was also a DM/HG and he traveled back in time by accident with her! But plans changed. I do think I'll check in on that possibility though!
As for Harry and Ron missing her and her eye color, it'll all be in due time. :)
I thank you for your support and willingness to write this review--despite not having an account! I hope you are able to see this message and get a few of your speculations answered! The new chapter will be up soon! Keep checking back!
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OH, MY GOSH. You are an amazing writer. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Keep up the GREAT work! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! You're actually my first! I am hoping to update more on here (than on other fansites I am currently using) and focus on publishing all of the backed up chapters I have currently (actually 9 more)! You'll see a surge of chapter posts soon, so keep checking back. Thanks again for the lovely review! :)
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