Please hurry with the next chapter, this is fantastic!!!:) Keep on writing!!!:) Report Review
I really think you have yourself a winner here with this story. I am really enjoying it so far. Even though it doesn't follow J.K. Rowlings way of Severus being Lily's best friend and lily meeting James at Hogwarts, I still love it. We aren't given a whole lot of information about Lily and James, which leaves a lot of room for our own creativity. Please do not give up on this story. The first few chapters are difficult to get through but hang in there because you can really make something out of this story. Can't wait to see what comes next! I will be staying intuned for chapter three!
Lots of love!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome review! I really appreciate it :) With this story I decided on Lily meeting James and they will meet Severus on the train and he won't be very nice. Please stay tuned for my soon-to-be-validated chapters.
Thanks again!! :) Report Review
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