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Review #1, by NymphadoraLupin Melody Lupin Chapter 2 (Diagon ally)

19th July 2011:
Work on your spelling and grammar. Maybe use a bit more structure when writing because I am confused her past name is lupin as in Remus Lupin but I don't know who her dad is. Is it him or Dumbledore??

Author's Response: Thank you and yes her name is LUPIN but in her first year she gets thrown out of her house as said in the memory and she is now living with Dumbledore

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Review #2, by jason The Supply List

21st June 2011:
omfg that was kick ass

Author's Response: Thank you

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