wow. you were right. It gets better ;) ;) ;) please please continue. Me love it :D :D Me want moreAuthor's Response: Haha, thank you! And I never said it gets better :P *cringes* Report Review
Hey! cwatts12 from the forums, here. So sorry I didn't comment earlier--my computer was being a little you-know-what.
Anyway, I absolutely loved this! It's really sweet and reminds me of a few dates I've had. Props to Molly for sticking it out--I probably would've left after the marriage question. Great job, darling! I can't wait to read what's next!Author's Response: Thank you :) Haha, glad it actually sounds like a date - I'm winging it! Report Review
I am here O.o Please forgive me, You requested this review so long ago, i've been so slack. Yes this means I am a bad person, and I am sorry. I will bake you lots of Muffins :) Any falvour. ( jUst not blueberry please, I'm allergic)
Okay, So your review, I actually really like this :D I didn't think I would becasue I'm not a great fan of Percy or Bill's kids. But This actually really hooked me.
I like the fact that you didn't babble alot about the Cousins, and HUGE BIG family that she has, considering there's so many Weasley's, most stories I read about are always so long in detail about those blasted weasley's. You did a great job and I didn't even get bored once.
I like the way you didn't jump from place to place either. I hate that! I end up twenty or so steps behind myself. >.<
I really like this, alot, Fav =] xxAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review! Don't even worry about the wait, I'm glad you liked it.
Well, I think the Weasley cousins would be close but they wouldn't all be hanging around with each other the entire time and you don't have to talk about what they're doing in every single story. Louis is there since he's dating her friend but I didn't think it was necessary for more Weasleys to be there.
Aw, thanks. Again, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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This is really cute! I like how much tom throws Molly off. And I like how you characterized her. Nice job thanks for writing!
~madelgrangerAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
This was a very nicely written story. Molly as a character seemed very likeable, however, I was unsure what to think about Tom. Initially, I thought that he was likeable, however, I then found him very abrupt and too forward with what he wanted to know... and then I liked him again.. I'm sure however that that was the intention of the characterisation, as you help us to feel what Molly was also feeling. Overall, he was a very clear Original Character who I would like to know more about. The kiss and also the thing with the rose was also very cute and romantic, and makes me warm to Tom as a character.
The description of Diagon Alley was nice also.
As far as I could tell, there were no grammatical or spelling errors. However, I did notice one thing:
"It's called a blind date for a reason, Molly. This will be good for you; we all agree you work too hard. Just relax and try to enjoy myself." The last word should be 'yourself' as he is talking about Molly. :)
Overall, a cute, lighthearted fic. I'll probably read all of the other entries too, to be honest :D
Leanne :)Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Yes, that was my intention to have Tom be the kind of guy you don't really know what to make of - Molly doesn't really know what to make of him either. I'm glad that, overall, you liked him and the story.
Thanks for pointing that out, I'll get it edited when my chapter image is ready. If you do read the other chapters, please do continue to point stuff like this out because I'm nit-picky like that but I'll sometimes not notice when proof-reading.
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Ha ha, I love this! I wasn't sure what to expect from the lack of a summary, but I decided to give this a chance.
The title brought the song "Hooked On A Feeling" into my head, and I was curious if this fic would run on a similar route, but it seems to have a personality all it's own.
I actually burst out laughing several times whilst reading this. I think one of the most memorable and amusing lines for me was: “Do you want to get married?” Considering that they're relative strangers, I don't blame Molly for being flabbergasted, but it was still rather funny.
I love your characterization of Molly and of Tom. Molly seems to always be classes as the boring good egg. It is nice to see her branch out from that role a bit in this piece and have some fun. Tom is rather eccentric, but he also seems like a lot of fun. I rather like that.
That and the fact that he is so assured that there will be another date.
Your plot is fun and while there are a ton of dating plots out there, this one was cute. You don't see too many blind dates being set up in the Wizarding World.
As for grammar, spelling, syntax, and flow I didn't see any issues there so great work there! I love pieces that are well groomed and have that polished look.
LindersAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you for this amazing review! I'm so glad you liked it. I was stumped for a summary so I decided to wait until I had a banner and chapter image and then add one in.
I've not actually heard of that song but the title was taken from the lyrics of another song (Eight Letters - Take That.)
Hehe, I can't shake the feeling of Molly being a stickler for rules but I wanted her to have some fun so I gave her Tom to get her to loosen up and have fun. I liked writing Tom - he's just so all-over-the-place and will say exactly what he thinks so I'm so happy you liked reading him.
Again, thanks so much for your lovely review.
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